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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 04 2015 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 23

Trevor and Luka are down, Arvin and Jimmy left alive. And of course Jack is still alive.

Serah knows how to interrogate. Hilde uses all these techniques, but Serah just uses old fashioned threats. She got her information need very quickly.

Jack is getting a little too popular. First, the girls that captured him, then Hilde, then Clarrissa, then Selene, then Lily(and that whole club), and now Serah.

When these women eat men all the time, you realize how lucky Jack is to one, be alive, and second, be of interest to so many of these women.

I just read chapter 2 of the 'Apex' and in both these chapters you mentioned someone breaking legs. First Henry, and now Trevor. Also, they both died shortly after.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Jack is getting a little cocky isn't he? Hmm

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 04 2015 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 23

Please don't tell me Garth was the one who de-virginized Serah. The son vicariously answering for the sins of the father is kind of an over-used cliche' when it comes to gts-torture!

Author's Response:

2 things. 1) Nope not Garth, 2) Who is to say Serah is not still virginal? :)

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