Wow, so most of these girls devour men as if they are nothing.

I thought this hunt would mean that every girl gets to keep a few tinies. Instead, they get eaten in seconds.

That scene with Selene was incredible. Seducing him before she eats him. That kid probably enjoyed it. Did he even scream?

Jack definitely got a show. I really hope someone gentle finds him.

I wonder how do the girls know when the hunt is over. Is there like a list and each girl tells everyone who they ate or found?

I like how all the tines woke up in a realistic environment. It makes the hunt more realistic and more fun.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Thank you for sharing your enthusiasm for the story. some of your thoughts will be answered in upcoming installments.