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Reviewer: Tigernach Signed [Report This]
Date: April 08 2018 9:47 AM Title: Chapter 1

I'm happy to hear that, and I agree about Jack Dalton. I can't wait to learn what his relationship to 'the Puck' or whoever he may be, is. I'm just guessing, but He fits so well into that character's profile, that I've already ID'd him as in that role. Don't tell me I'm wrong... I would be greatly confused to learn that there were two such personalities among the Gods!

Reviewer: Tigernach Signed [Report This]
Date: March 29 2018 11:11 AM Title: Chapter 32

Hi, from one of your biggest fans, if not the most vocal: I am greatly interested in learning if you are intending to continue any of the three stories ('The Legion', 'The Book' or 'The Contract'), that make up this related series, whether in the future or ever...?

Author's Response:

Hi Tigernach,

My apologies for my lengthy period of absence. I greatly appreciate not only your inquiries, interest, but also your guidance and input and holding me to task :) I absolutely adore this trio of stories and DO intend on bringing them to conclusion. My hope would be to wrap up the contract, then the book. My inclination is to re purpose the Legion as a stand alone story with a different cast of giantesses. Much to my own dismay, I also have a number of other half finished stories in need of completion. That said, of all my stories, of all my characters, Jack Dalton is perhaps my favorite. I guess that's a long winded yes.

Reviewer: Tigernach Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 09 2017 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 32

I hate to disturb you if you are working on some more important project, but I have been waiting for over 2 years for this story to continue. I would hate to think that you have decided to drop it unfinished... It is such an interesting tale. I hope that you have just taken a break from it, and plan to continue it in the near future.



Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 29 2015 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 32

It seems like a cycle for Cade. When will he learn?

Perhaps, Cade gets thrown into the party as well. He will get some answers, but even more questions.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Cade is about to understand and once you know, you cannot un-know, :O

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 29 2015 9:21 AM Title: Chapter 32

Hmmmmm! Did Clarice get her Little Jack back? Maybe chapter 33 could answer that from her perspective (hint-hint!).

Author's Response:

Clarice has not yet gotten her Jack after his little encounter with Selene. there are still others yet in the house new to him, much to Clarice's chagrin.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 22 2015 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 31

Man! I've said it before, and I'll say it, again. The rivalry between these Circles would no doubt make a Mafia gang war look like a 1960's love-in.

Author's Response:

Or the spanish Inquisition like a friendly afternoon tea party. when the claws come out...meow

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 21 2015 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 31

Morrigan is another girl with magic. Not with Hilde. Got it.

Cade doesn't believe in magic, so he thinks that Hilde's statements are bullshit. Got it.

Dalton and his friends formed a crew of six which failed miserably as they each got killed or captured. Got it.

And they are all connected by one man. Cade. Got it.

While more clues are revealed, it will take time for me to understand the details.

It's still interesting. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

so far so good, :)

Reviewer: brett533 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 12 2015 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 30

Awesome!!!! I love how you are keeping this updated more!! truelly good to know it just wont be another unfinished story, but I was curious why do the women eat people? Like do they gain power from this? Cant wait to see what is going to happen next!

Author's Response:

Glad the story still has interest to you. I am wrestling with a couple of different explanations for the vore, needless to say, there is definitely something in it for them.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: October 11 2015 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 1

@Carycomic, I don't see why I would hate you for that. I found it funny. Besides, I need pics or vids to be that aroused.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 11 2015 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 30

Tom Speedy is going to hate this. But, it's got to be said.

"WOW! Talk about Jack-ing off!!"

Author's Response:

I thought she was just getting jacked up! ;)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 11 2015 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 30

Haha, that's how I comb my hair too. Just a simple hand over hair technique.

If I saw Selene at the door of a house telling me to come inside, I will gladly oblige.

Anger always leads to something bad. That's what happened to Cade. Question is, did he shrink, or just sleep?

When you switched over to Jack's perspective, it was only then that I realized that they were all in Hilde's house. Earlier when Cade "heard these voices", I thought it was voices in his head because of memories that young girl like Selene may have caused. I guess not. It was legit voices in the house, and it makes sense why Cade asked if Hilde had entertainment.

Yes! Finally Selene has her fun with Jack! She is my favorite giantess of this entire story and it's about time she does her thing with Jack. I love her playful attitude.

Yeah, how was Jack able to breathe? Was it because he was Jack, and he is some ancient god or something?

I love the wording? She pinned his hands behind his back! (If only she tied them up. One day, you have to include a girl shoving a man inside her with his hands tied up. Besides Janine.)

If Jack was unconscious, don't you think maybe Selene thought he was dead? That would have been my first instinct. Instead she kisses him and grins. Like a kiss goodnight sleep that he will never wake up on.

If Jack did die, what a way to go! Died in a giantess pussy during an orgasm. Can't get better than that. Well, I'm sure that Jack didn't die, but you can't help but wonder.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

I have tried to make Slene sexy and playful, glad you like her. Remember Jack is a son of Garth who is in essence a god.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 03 2015 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 29

Hmmmmmm! Why do I get the feeling that Jack's ex-partner-in-crime caused some "collateral damage" to a beloved relative of Ms. Kane's?

Author's Response:

We shalllearn more of the newly arrived Ms. Kane in the forthcoming chapter as Cade is practically on hilde's dorrstep as we speak. 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 03 2015 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 29

Yay! Long chapter!

Cade is getting himself in another trap. He keeps doing this. When does he learn? Perhaps it's time Hilde teaches him a lesson.

I thought Jmmy was a scardy cat. How did he get confident all of a sudden? Did Vanessa just great him right? Sure Serah didn't kill him, but is that the only reason why he gloats? I think Jimmy is getting cocky. Next girl should teach him a lesson as well.

Morrigan Kane reminds me of Hilde 2.0. She hunts and finds her prey. I need more info about her to make a decision about her. Still she is interesting.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Morrigan does come across as a rather in control kind of sort with a no nonsense kind of attitude. Could be interesting. Was she a friend of Lily's, Hilde, or someone new. We shall see, very very quickly!

Reviewer: Story smith Signed [Report This]
Date: October 01 2015 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 28

Dude I didn't mean to gilt.  You into anything but thanks anyway this is a great chapter

Author's Response:

Lol not guilt. I'm glad you reminded me there are still people out there who are invested in the story. It is very gratifying as writer that there is still a demand for this tale. Very motivating. As an aside glad this installment was in keeping with the flavor of the story despite the lapse in regular updates. :)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 30 2015 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 28

Haven't seen this updated in a while. Good thing I still remember some of it.

I remember Vanessa from the lake. She was with Selene. Yep, Jimmy will have a good time.

As for Cade, I'm pretty sure Hilde is about to spring a trap. I can't wait till she pounces.

I also can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

I know story gets cousin especially with overlapping characters and a month between updates. And a ton of people to try and remember. 80000 words is a lot of story :S

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 30 2015 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 28

Hmmmm! With a first name like "Morrigan," I have to suspect that ADA Kane belongs to yet another rival Circle. Which, of course, does not bode well for Hilde's future love-interest!

Yet, on a lighter note? Methinks Vanessa is about to give new meaning to the phrase: "Have yourself a Slim Jim."


And, how about that? I'm Review #50!

Author's Response:

Slim Jim absolutely missed it! That is awesome! Snap into a slim Jim omg way too funny. Great job!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 28 2015 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 27

In the White Wolf RPG, "Werewolf: The Apocalypse," the sons of matriarchal Black Fury Garou were usually raised by the more egalitarian Children of Gaia. I would therefore surmise a similar situation amongst these covert goddesses (i.e, sexually segregated foster parenting).

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 28 2015 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 27

In chapter 26, there was no mention of a China that's new. (Or atleast that's what I remember.)

So Jack was in some sort of cafe with a black sheet on it? I have no idea what he was trapped in.

Ok, I was wrong about Selene and I now know that she faked everything. But, the chances that they knew Lily and Jessa would participate seemed very unlikely. I mean, sure they would get Jack, but to know Lily's actions and whereabouts of Jack's confinement, seems godly, as if someone predicted the future.

Simone and Elizabeth......yep.

Serah is creeping me out. Like does she really want Jack because of his brother? She already has his picture. It's like when you fall in love with someone, then they died. Soon, you find out that they have a twin, and you see your lover in that twin. (Then things get weird.)

12 giantesses and 1 tiny man. Sounds like heaven.

"You are the chosen one, the one who is the son of Garth, the one who is going to save us all". Sounds like some fairy tale stuff. Lol.

Interesting chapter, but it felt like there was too much talking.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 17 2015 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 26

It would seem Garth the Trickster has been "doing tricks" for a long time.

Author's Response:

Oh he been around awhile this boy 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 17 2015 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 26

Long time since this was last updated.

Lots of interesting things in this chapter.

You put the title "bait" before the section on Jack. I'm not sure who or what was the bait. Was it Jack, the symbol on the floor, the loud noise, Lily herself, or the snake? Whatever it was, this new woman knows.

Did that woman just kill Lily? Like some sort of sacrifice? Or was she teleported. I mean, she vanished, I'm not sure what exactly happened to her.

Now who is this strange sneaky woman? I'm going to guess Selene. She probably figured out that Jessa tricked her and she guessed that Lily took him. Also, Selene hates Lily, so she doesn't mind being brutal toward her.

I would take the giantess over the snake 100% of the time.

Wait, did she just blow him a kiss that made him sleep? That's some fairy tale stuff right there. Haha.

I have a bad feeling about Serah. She seems pretty powerful. Almost Hilde level power. I love it when Hilde and Serah just walk into areas that are considered dangerous and they don't give a fuck, literally.

I wish I could know everyone's name in real life. That would be surprisingly useful.

Whoa, whoa whoa!??! Did she just shrink both of them and swallowed them both in a second? That's what it seems like. Now imagine Jimmy's perspective......mindblown!

So Jack's mom has the mark too? Is she one of these powerful women too? Circle of life. Powerful woman gives birth to guy. Guy gets in trouble with powerful girls. Powerful girls meet powerful woman. And the cycle continues.

Wait a minute!!! So Darla married this guy and gave birth to Jack. And this same guy happens to be Serah's lost love???? So Darla and Serah are with the same man? Wtf is going on here? Lol. Does this mean that Serah is like Jack's stepmom? Now my mind just blew up.

So Serah was looking for him for 2000 years and now learns that he died? Wow, that's awful. Now she wants a picture of Jack to remind her of her love, that's nice. Jimmy sees the picture of Jack, and he's like wtf. I can see why Serah gave him that stare.

Serah's into Jack's dad. Not Jack, but they look the same, so she's into both. But her love is her Dad. Got it.

This story just got even deeper. Now we know how Jack is special. I wonder what we will learn next.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

In the Legion you have been introduced to a very young Serah who has just captured the Roamn centurion Tius Valerius. It appears as if tius and Jack shared the same father, but separated by two thousand years. Whatever happened to tius froze Serah's heart, and seeing Jack here now is having an effect. Power for power, Serah is stronger than Hilde - the girl is badass!

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