Date: May 01 2015 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 1
Really enjoyed reading your different versions , your writing style is great and you make the characters seem gentle and fun loving with what is going on. Would definately love to see you explore more interactions between these characters with Mark becoming a few inches tall in her world whilst she is enjoying teasing him with her new sized assets!
Date: May 01 2015 1:11 PM Title: Possible Ending 4
It's been a fun read, and it's good to hear that this might continue. Here's my ideas:
Possible Ending 1: What happens when the three of them try on the panties, and what becomes of Mark?
Possible Ending 2: What does Sarah do with Mark, and what ultimately happens to him? Putting him in her panties while she walks around would be nice.
Possible Ending 3: What does Kacey do with Mark and Sarah, and what ultimately happens to the three?
Possible Ending 4: What do the three do to Mark and Sarah? And to each other?
Possible Ending 5: Make Sarah even taller than before, 44 or 88 feet tall.
Plus everything you've come up with.
And in all of them, show us what ultimately happens to everyone involved, and how reality has been altered.
Date: April 29 2015 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow, I love the dialogue, the action, both characters and their reactions seemed so authentic and realistic.
I wish this story could go on forever, and perhaps Sarah can show off her size to her family.
I like how Mark is trying to resist but Sarah is just too powerful for him.
Sarah just sounds sexy, as if her word play can turn Mark on.
That's how good your writing is, and I can't wait for more!