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Reviewer: Tigernach Signed [Report This]
Date: April 28 2015 7:28 AM Title: A strange night.

Now this is a fascinating story, and your grammar/spelling was much better. Will you be adding to this story? It looks to be very promising!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: April 27 2015 8:37 PM Title: A strange night.

Oh wow, that's the whole story. Haha, I thought it was just getting started.

Well this chapter(story) is pretty good and I would love to see you write more!

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Date: April 27 2015 4:56 PM Title: A strange night.

Wow, beautiful and sexy writing!

I really enjoy stories that jump right into the action.

You said you uploaded on GC. What is GC?

Are Alicia's parents there? Might be interesting if she has to hide her men from them.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! GC is Giantesscity, it's a great forum if you haven't been there. I honestly don't have plans to expand this story, unfortunately. Most of my stories only have one chapter and I wrote this one two years ago. I'd idly mutter something about a sequel, but every time I do that I get quiet and stop writing for a couple years O_o

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