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Reviewer: ellubkru Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 21 2015 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Set Up

Really liked the story and was looking forward to what you would do with the more micro sizes. Too bad it's not been updated for a while.

Although when you said "Not as much Amy getting out of it, but Amy getting sweet revenge" kind of killed it for me. I don't really care to see the tables turned, and knowing in advance what's going to happen takes away a lot of the experience.

Still, favorit'd

Reviewer: shall328 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 26 2015 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Trevor's Return

It's nice to see you back again. I really enjoyed the interaction this chapter. The part with Chloe rubbing Amy between her feet, while she was covered in spit, was a great bit. I can't wait to see what comes next. 



Author's Response: Thank you, I agree. It was my favourite bit. You can expect more stuff similar to come soon ;)

Reviewer: Syndrea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 25 2015 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Trevor's Return

Great Chapter and welcome back!



Author's Response: Thank you, I'm back for good!

Reviewer: The Shrunken Scholar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 25 2015 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Trevor's Return

Looks like things are going to become even more rough for little Amy. Good to see that you're back. And don't worry about the wait. I can totally understand writing troubles! :)

Author's Response: Thank you for more kind words :)

Reviewer: rubber Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07 2015 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Confessions To A Doll

Great story so far



Author's Response: Thank you for your support on this. More stuff to come soon.

Reviewer: shall328 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 07 2015 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Confessions To A Doll

It was nice to see Amy stand up for herself, but I've got to admit, I loved seeing Chloe's respond how she did. I'm also glad that Amy seems pretty durable, which allows Chloe to be rough with her. That can definitely lead to some interesting scenarios between the two. Keep up the great work.



Author's Response: Ohhh you betcha there's lots of exciting stuff coming soon! Thanks for another review, means the world to me. :)

Reviewer: Gregpatt Signed [Report This]
Date: May 06 2015 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Confessions To A Doll

This has just become my new favorite series. Can't wait to see what comes next! Hopefully Some male interaction soon? :)

Author's Response: Thank you for your support. Some male content coming soon but I have to be careful, because a lot of people don't like it. Thanks again :)

Reviewer: MostKnownUnknowns Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 06 2015 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Trap Finish

Love the story but would love it more if somehow Amy got out of all this. I'm a huge fan of the tables turning. Lol



Author's Response: Don't worry, I plan on a massive twist in a few chapters. Not as much Amy getting out of it, but Amy getting sweet revenge. Thank you so much for your support.

Reviewer: michaelares Signed [Report This]
Date: May 06 2015 8:49 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Set Up

Love it want more👍



Author's Response: Thank you for supporting me, another chapter coming today don't worry! :)

Reviewer: footguy123 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 06 2015 7:35 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Set Up

This review is long overdue. I find myself reading stories and enjoying all the writers have to offer and allow myself to forget to show the gratification the helps them continue. This story is one of my all time favorites. It's easy to picture myself in Amy's place(minus the being a woman part) and feel the same hopelessness that comes with inevitable shrinking and loss of any power or rights. I can't wait to see where you take this story and will continue to be looking daily for the next chapter. Please continue this story. Amazing work!



Author's Response: Thank you so so much. It's amazing having people like you, who's story I have read and loved, commenting on my first ever story and loving it so much. This is the motivation to keep me going, you and every big fan of my work out there are the reason the story is still going strong. So thank you :)

Reviewer: subiectum Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 06 2015 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Trap Finish

Ooooh she's so cruel! I really wonder how small she got!



Author's Response: I know right :P you won't have to wait long. Thanks for your support.

Reviewer: Lgts Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 05 2015 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Trap Finish

Fantastic story so far



Author's Response: Thank you so so much for your support, more really good stuff soon :)

Reviewer: shall328 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 05 2015 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Trap Finish

I meant to comment on your last chapter, but I totally forgot. I really enjoyed the previous two chapters, they were great. I am loving how sinister Chloe is being, and the fact that Amy doesn't think she is doing anything on purpose. I can't wait to see how much Amy has shrunk, and what fun Chloe is going to have.

Also,the video you made was amazing. The women looked great, and all the interaction was well done. The final scene of the woman looking out of the mouth at herself in the mirror was done perfectly. That's the first time I've ever seen that done in a video.



Author's Response: Thank you for your support. I really love how Chloe's character is turning out, I feel she's going to be different to the generic woman with a shrunken man/woman in stories on this site. Not that I'm disrespecting them, I love them. But I feel it's time to bring something different to the table. Also thank you for your support on my video, it means a lot. I will definitely make more videos soon. You won't have to wait long for the next chapter, I promise :)

Reviewer: The Shrunken Scholar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 05 2015 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Trap Finish

Jeez. Chloe certainly didn't waste any time getting started. Amy's going to be walking funny for awhile. I wonder how small she became. Hope we don't have to wait too long to see

Author's Response: Nope Chloe is an eager beaver. And I now have 15 reviews so watch out for the chapter today :P

Reviewer: Jay Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 05 2015 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Set Up

I love this sordid tale and the idea of orgasms causing her to shrink. I know the main character has a foot fetish, but when she's an inch tall, Chloe's feet will smell and be too much for her. I can't wait to see her reduced to a puny piece of sock lint.

Author's Response: Oh they will definitely be too much for her. And maybe that's not what Amy has in store for her, maybe it is. Who knows ;) thanks for your support.

Reviewer: Syndrea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 01 2015 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Set Up

Great story, actually it is going so good it made me register so I can review.



Author's Response: Thank you so so so much, your support means a hell of a lot to me. More good stuff to come soon :D

Reviewer: shall328 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 01 2015 10:38 PM Title: Interlude 1

You're doing a great job with the story so far. I am really enjoying every chapter you post. I'm looking forward to seeing where you take it from here. Sorry to hear about the negative experience with that guy, some people are just like that. There are a lot of great people here, so I'm sure there will be way more decent people than jerks. 



Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm so glad that people are enjoying my story. I never thought when I started this that so many people would enjoy and leave me so many positive reviews. I'm so glad that people aren't crucifying me for my writing, my first language is Italian so my writing will probably never be perfect. And I've long forgotten about the jerk, so many positive and nice people on this site that I have no need to bother with the bad ones. :)

Reviewer: The Shrunken Scholar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 01 2015 7:52 PM Title: Interlude 1

An interesting look into the mind of Chloe. Looks like things are going to get pretty rough for poor, little Amy. I was surprised to see that someone from this community was rude to you. Everyone I've talked to has been so nice. Guess there always has to be that one person though.

Author's Response: Thank you for another review, your kind words mean so much to me. More stuff to come soon :)

Reviewer: Dante123113 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 30 2015 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Hidden Fantasies

Nice! Didn't expect THAT! I can't wait to see what comes next!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, there's an interlude coming tonight and then at least one chapter a day. So you aren't going to be starved of the story long, I promise :P

Reviewer: The Shrunken Scholar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 29 2015 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Goodbyes

A good foot action chapter. I might suggest adding a bit more detail for the next one. This story is still shaping up nicely. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thank you for another review, it means a lot. And also thank you for your advice, I fully agree with you that it wasn't detailed enough. But right now I'm focusing on speeding things up. Because I've wrote 10,000 words and the main character has only shrunk 6 inches lol. Thank you again :)

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