Reviews For Britian rises
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Reviewer: noneaccount Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 18 2015 11:25 AM Title: Chapter 1

I completely understand.

It sometimes takes me almost two-weeks to get a chapter to a length which I think is just right. This is painful, especially when I want to publish something I think is good ASAP. 

Reviewer: noneaccount Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 16 2015 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 1

Just as others said.

It should really be longer (more descriptive). 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the feedback, I've always found it difficult to make the story longer 

Reviewer: noneaccount Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 16 2015 9:50 AM Title: Chapter 1

Nice to see you wrote it.  Congrats! 



Author's Response:

Thanks, any help you could provide would be greatly appreciated 

Reviewer: Big_n_evil Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 16 2015 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 1

This is a very interesting premise but the descriptions could be a bit more fleshed out. Also, I think you need to pay a bit more attention to things like capitalisation and punctuation.

Look forward to seeing more from you!

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 15 2015 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 1

Could be fleshed out a bit more but good stuff so far

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