[Report This]Date: April 14 2015 9:39 AM Title: Power Plays
This story is absolutely fantastic. From the gritty initial chapters to the unforgettable character of Lyria. This story seems to have everything. I especially love her attitude towards Sam. Honestly when I found out she was going to be taking charge of him as a tiny 3" man I thought great it's going to be like every other story here with some psycho who dominates some poor tiny fool. However, learning how she is I couldn't be more pleased with how this story has turned out. She has this kind of apathy in regarding Sam to make him her perfect pet(which is something I have yet to see written so well).
May I just say you've done a remarkable job in building Lyria as a character and Sam(my) as well. As such I cannot wait to see what happens next.
aaron
PS good choice with the blue nail polish and I hope there will be more of her pretty toes later.
Author's Response:
And here I was worried I made her come off too domineering and generic haha. Thank you so much for the kind words. I figured making her a little more passive agressive would be best as I favor slow build myself. She's most certainly more than a little psycho (her idea of a first date comes to mind), just a little less overt about it most of the time.
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PS Oh there will be plenty of time for that later.