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Reviewer: Intheliar Signed [Report This]
Date: June 29 2017 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 1

Aww dude that was kinda sad! But I have a feeling that Camilla would try and steal him later to rescue him if she really cared about him. Surely she knew that he didn't want to stay with such a sister-- an owner who cared not for his genuine happiness.

Reviewer: WilliamHanna Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 05 2016 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 1

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Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 14 2015 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 1

great chapter even if you has been nasty in the end for oliver. I thought you was in hibernation  until you post "Consequences". 



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it. I actually wrote this several months ago on a whim, I was just waiting for Jacksmith to get the series posted on here to share it.

Reviewer: MrSirk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 14 2015 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 1

HAHAHAHA! Poor Oliver. That will ruin your whole weekend. Can't feel too bad for him though He's still insanely lucky there is no doubt! 



Author's Response:

Maybe more than a weekend >.>. Though yes, he's still insanely lucky given the treatment of other folks in his position.

Thank you for commenting.

Reviewer: DarcKage Signed [Report This]
Date: April 14 2015 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 1

These stories are way too full of potential to leave it at one-shots.  :c



Author's Response:

What can I say, I like to be a bit of a dick :P

Reviewer: SpookyTaco Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 13 2015 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 1

pet - a domestic or tamed animal or bird kept for companionship or pleasure and treated with care and affection.

Companionship, pleasure, care, and affection. Would it really be so bad?



Author's Response:

It's quite a curious thing in this scenario, honestly. In this particular world, Ollie likely does have things as best as someone afflicted by this disease could: He has a loving person that's invested not just in a continued life for him, but in providing a comfortable life for him - granted that Kaylie also expects a small amount of returned affections, but he's also not abused in any real sense, not by Kaylie or even her sorority sisters. Of course, the real negative is that Ollie himself has 0 agency in his position in the world - to the point where, as he's found the love of his life, he has to depend on that lover to make the case for possession of him. He makes no case for himself, in fact saying not a word, and instinctively performs in a manner that Kaylie enjoys.His life isn't really his. And in a way, that might be more painful than any potential mistreatment that he could have been faced with had his owner been less kind. Psychologically, anyway.

 

Thank you for the comments, in any case. Always good to hear from you :).

Reviewer: realRS Signed [Report This]
Date: April 13 2015 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow, I absolutely loved it.  This is a wonderful one shot.  So much life building in a short story, I connected to the characters very deeply.

I am such a huge fan of this new trend of short scenes in a shrinking world.  

 



Author's Response:

I'm very glad to hear that you connected so well to the story, and I'll echoe that gladness that you enjoy the short scene format. Thank you for reviewing.

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