Reviews For Shrunken Couple
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Reviewer: carnaj2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 10 2015 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 1

As ChaoticParadigm pointed out, this story did first appear on Writing.com a couple years ago. It was started as an Interactive Story by a writer named 33 who set up the scene, and continued for several chapters by me.

My Tag on here is carnaj (or carnaj1 or carnaj2) and I've reviewed a few stories on here as well as posted Home Invasion, HSC and Trusty Lab Assistant among others, so you can check those stories out to compare writing style. Unfortunately my original Account at Writing.com was suspended due to inactivity (I was offline for quite awhile due to various personal reasons), so viewing the story there shows that additional chapters were added by 'A Non-Existent User', which is probably why Muammar assumed that he could post it.

I'm not angry this was posted here, though I do agree with ChaoticParadigm that both 33 and myself should get some recognition. I might have posted my version at some point, as I have added a few chapters since returning to the Internet, though only on my computer so far. I may yet do so, but with acknowlegement to 33 and a preface concerning Muammar and his posting.

As I said, I am not angry. A little flattered actually that he chose this story to post. Plagarism I've heard is the highest form of praise a writer can get. Thank you for the good Reviews and the 5 Star Rating.

And to Muammar: Do the right thing.

carnaj

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 07 2015 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 1

This story is awesome, I very much enjoyed that. I didn't care for the shift to male content at the end but I figured it would make an appearance at some point given that there was a description given for 6 people at the beginning.

Have no idea if this is your story but I'm glad you posted it. If it's not yours, you should mention that and give credit.

Now I'm wondering if this story was ever finished, would love to see more of it. It had great dynamic between Ms Morris and the couple, which I hope continues to be the focal point with just the three of them.

Reviewer: Rodan1980 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 06 2015 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great story! You might want to change the rating from a G rating to an X or an R rating, but still, a great story!

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