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Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: April 09 2015 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 4

Wow,poor Ned. What will happen now? Will the mother feel more confident in holding him.will the world really view all little people as bugs or pets and nothing more? Will Ned's wife come looking for him? And what would she do if she found him? A plot twist would be if Ned's wife found another shrunken man while searching for her husband. How would she treat the new little man in her life?

Reviewer: methodman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 08 2015 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 4

Amazing chapter! I love the addition of the newest character

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 08 2015 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 4

Brittany wins and the world was happy.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 07 2015 10:51 AM Title: Prologue

guess the husband will decide to keep Ned & his son (in the future) to avoid lawsuit/prison. I hope that will end well for Jeremy but I don't think it's writer's style.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 06 2015 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 3

One does not simply walk into "Britdor"...well maybe they could if they were big enough.

 

Great stuff and hope Britt finds more.

Reviewer: realRS Signed [Report This]
Date: April 06 2015 3:51 PM Title: Prologue

You are a hell of a good writer.  Your selection of details creates an engrossing story full of wonderful notes that still flows quickly and doesn't get bogged down.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 04 2015 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 2

Please let Brittany meet a few more minions before you're done, great stuff.

Reviewer: frankstergirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 04 2015 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 2

Love this story it's really interesting to read. Look forward to seeing more :)

- frankstergirl

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 03 2015 12:02 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is superbly written,very realistic interaction and reactions, detail and flow is fantastic, story just unfolds very comfortably. If a world such as this existed, this story gives the feeling that this is how it would be. 

 Very much look forward to more of this. Great job!

 

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: April 03 2015 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 1

Chapter 1 was excellent. You painted a picture with your writing. Loved Ned's feeling of independence by walking ginger. His plan of leaving the shoes was a good one. You describe his feelings toward his wife at 21 inches, how will he feel now? Why did she take a picture of him? Was it to show a girlfriend, was it to blind him for an easy capture? Seeing the little mans struggles makes it so realistic. The capture or escape is always a thrilling part. Nice story. Diesel

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 02 2015 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 1

I am greatly enjoying this take on the shrinking virus, good show.

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01 2015 6:34 PM Title: Prologue

I very much enjoyed the beginning to this story. Nice realism. Will there be talk about the rest of his family and what happened to them? Looking forward to more. Nice description of the giantesses.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 01 2015 5:54 PM Title: Prologue

Great story, looking forward to more.

Reviewer: microtopian Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 01 2015 4:28 PM Title: Prologue

Love it so far. I'm hoping they'll be more?

Reviewer: realRS Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01 2015 2:58 PM Title: Prologue

Great start, you did a great job of getting the story out of the living room and into the world

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