Date: April 24 2015 11:46 PM Title: Interlude 2
Yeah, I like the Alicia and Jeremy chapters better. It's just so more interesting, and Alicia is somewhat nice to Jeremy. Since he is well behaved. I just don't really care about ned and his story.
Nice story can't wait for the next chapter:)
Date: April 09 2015 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 4
Wow,poor Ned. What will happen now? Will the mother feel more confident in holding him.will the world really view all little people as bugs or pets and nothing more? Will Ned's wife come looking for him? And what would she do if she found him? A plot twist would be if Ned's wife found another shrunken man while searching for her husband. How would she treat the new little man in her life?