Date: June 12 2015 9:07 PM Title: Interlude 3
Probably my favorite chapter, I'm starting to like Jeremys story line better. Glad to see another character added to Neds story, it felt like it was getting a little stale with all the shoe cleaning, except for when her sister gets him, she seems a little more devilish.
Date: May 20 2015 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 6
love the concept of all of this, and this chapter is a favorite for me. it's the kind of thing I'll come back to, just to read this bit. usually when giant men make an appearance in a story 'round these parts I'm left a bit frustrated as they don't get to star in the hot bits. Mike's domination of Ned is really fucking great. loved it. bravo! really enjoying the read all around.