Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: April 20 2016 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 19

I just read all 24 chapters.

I find it very interesting to see you go back and forth with Ned and Jeremy and later combine their stories into one.

Also, this story is complex, and that's great. Most stories are simple and easy to forget. However, this story is strong and you feel the characters.

All the young girls seem the same. They want a slave, abuse them, and laugh at how worthless they are. They use them as objects.

The parents had a strong hatred for the tinies in the beginning, but now they enjoy having them. They don't seem as cruel, but definately use them for pleasure.

Lana seems like that hot girl that isn't cruel and you can obviously see why many shrunken people chose her to take care of them.

Alicia seems like a mix of cruel and sexy. It's weird but I like it.

One thing I noticed in this story is that there seems to be an overdose of feet. Not just feet, but leaving a shrunken person inside a boot or shoe. It's the same punishment over and over again and it gets a bit repetitive. Most of it is just Brittney but surely, she is more creative than that.

What's with all the ladies wanting their nails done every chapter? That also appears too often in the story in my opinion.

This immunity universe is pretty cool. I like this concept about a disease and how it can be genetically given to others. Part of me really wants some reverse immunity thing to happen and all the shrunken grow while the giants shrink. Will the tables turn?

It's amazing how in other stories, people will kill themselves when they shrink, but here, this family suffers so much and are willing to live on with it. It makes me wonder, have they thought about death?

Lana seems to be my favorite character. Maybe is becuase she is a mystery to me. I don't know what kind of giantess she will be.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: hunterfury22 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 19 2016 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 19

It would be cool if you ever did a crossover between this story and your other ones? Maybe have Brittany go to college with Stacey, Jessica and Megan from the sorority stories or have Chelsea come in.

Reviewer: Maximus Signed [Report This]
Date: April 18 2016 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 19

Definitely my favorite story going on this site, love all these girls. Definitely getting intense for Jeremy, talking about eating him and crushing him, nobody has actually been killed off yet, makes me wonder if things will get worse for the shrinkees. 

 

Looking forward to the next chapter!