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Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 12 2015 9:07 PM Title: Interlude 3

Probably my favorite chapter, I'm starting to like Jeremys story line better. Glad to see another character added to Neds story, it felt like it was getting a little stale with all the shoe cleaning, except for when her sister gets him, she seems a little more devilish. 

Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31 2015 5:37 AM Title: Interlude 3

Thanks for the chapter.

Yup I still like this storyline better. Are they ever going to cross paths? If not then it's cool.

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