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Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: May 04 2015 12:10 PM Title: Chapter 8

Love Lana. Her talking on the phone enhanced the story. I hope he doesn't spill anything in his weakened condition. Greatly enjoying your story. Very realistic. Enjoyed her comments about his living in the fish tank.

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 30 2015 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 8

Awesome chapter, this story is superbly written, very enjoyable to read. Great scene where she torments him with her mouth. I disagree with the other poster, Neds story line is great.

Keep up the excellent work!

Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 29 2015 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 8

Nice chapter.
I still prefer the Jeremy and Alicia storyline. Just feel like I'm connecting to the characters. More than Ned and his tormentors.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 29 2015 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 8

Ah this family...

 

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