Reviews For The Benefits of Immunity
Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: May 04 2015 12:10 PM Title: Chapter 8
Date: May 04 2015 12:10 PM Title: Chapter 8
Love Lana. Her talking on the phone enhanced the story. I hope he doesn't spill anything in his weakened condition. Greatly enjoying your story. Very realistic. Enjoyed her comments about his living in the fish tank.
Reviewer: Maximus Signed [Report This]
Date: April 30 2015 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 8
Date: April 30 2015 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 8
Awesome chapter, this story is superbly written, very enjoyable to read. Great scene where she torments him with her mouth. I disagree with the other poster, Neds story line is great.
Keep up the excellent work!
Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed [Report This]
Date: April 29 2015 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 8
Date: April 29 2015 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 8
Nice chapter.
I still prefer the Jeremy and Alicia storyline. Just feel like I'm connecting to the characters. More than Ned and his tormentors.
Reviewer: AdamX Signed [Report This]
Date: April 29 2015 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 8
Date: April 29 2015 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 8
Ah this family...
:)