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Reviewer: bailey69 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 14 2017 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 1

it was also very boring, it was to long about how horrable the pepoles life are

Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 03 2015 12:02 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is superbly written,very realistic interaction and reactions, detail and flow is fantastic, story just unfolds very comfortably. If a world such as this existed, this story gives the feeling that this is how it would be. 

 Very much look forward to more of this. Great job!

 

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: April 03 2015 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 1

Chapter 1 was excellent. You painted a picture with your writing. Loved Ned's feeling of independence by walking ginger. His plan of leaving the shoes was a good one. You describe his feelings toward his wife at 21 inches, how will he feel now? Why did she take a picture of him? Was it to show a girlfriend, was it to blind him for an easy capture? Seeing the little mans struggles makes it so realistic. The capture or escape is always a thrilling part. Nice story. Diesel

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 02 2015 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 1

I am greatly enjoying this take on the shrinking virus, good show.

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