Date: May 30 2015 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Past, Betrayal
I looked her up at W.O.W. Wiki.
Yeesh!
She looks like the love-child of Bugs Bunny and T'Pring (Spock's ex-wife from "Amok Time")!!
Date: April 18 2015 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Past, Betrayal
Double agents always act opposite of their true selves when undercover. Or, as Mr. Spock told Capt. Kirk at the end of "Mirror, Mirror:"
"It was easier for you, as civilized people, to act like barbarians than it was for them, as barbarians, to act like civilized people."
Date: April 17 2015 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Past, Betrayal
good chapter, however, i forgot who's attacked the base of Society when Isabella has been killed. Can somebody help?
Author's Response:
I can. And I have yet to say who was behind the attack. The only thing we know for sure is that it wasn't the Phoenixes and was highly unlikely to be the Snakes.
Date: March 17 2015 12:15 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Past, Betrayal
First Julia comes back, and now this. It's a good time for me. Now let's see what happens to Gabby, and Alice too, it seems.
Author's Response:
I need to read that, but just don't have the time...
Also a bit of spoliers but Gabby winds up with Sanders and the rest while Alice does a big damn hero moment on Aviel.
Date: March 17 2015 10:32 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Past, Betrayal
Aww man. I'm so happy this ones back but that's torture with every 2 week updates man lol.
great stuff though as always. This will always be a huge favorite story of mine
Author's Response:
Yeah I know, but trying to get them out sooner would be torture for me and cause the quality to slip. And I am not willing to let that slid.
Thanks for the kind words as always and glad you like it.
[Report This]Date: March 17 2015 9:38 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Past, Betrayal
WOW!
Great opener for the last act. Especially as it erases my previous suspicion that Gabby was now a double-agent for the Swords. And, particularly, because I get to leave the debut review for once!
Author's Response:
Indeed, Gabby was never a double agent. Though, honestly, did you think someone as.... unsubtle as Gabby could have ever been a double agent? Her tactics are pretty much limited to hit the problem till it goes away.