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Reviewer: HectorVanDyne Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 20 2015 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 8: Uninvited Guest

I wonder who Grace should be scared of most, Roxy or Roxy and Allen's mother.

I mean, they both seem pretty protective of Allen.



Author's Response:

Roxy and Allen's mother would have the easiest time at stopping Grace, but Roxy herself can get pretty creative when the people she cares about are in trouble.

Reviewer: julieshrink Signed starhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 20 2015 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 8: Uninvited Guest

Very Weak!

Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 19 2015 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 8: Uninvited Guest

Yeah this story is like Julia and Blackmail 3 mix together, with its own twist. Hopefully Grace doesn't do anything bad or at least Roxy get back soon.

Another good chapter:)

Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing. Interesting to picture it as a Julia and Blackmail 3 mix; hopefully it's not as dark as those 2!

Reviewer: HectorVanDyne Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 19 2015 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 8: Uninvited Guest

Grace better be careful, i'm thinking Roxy won't be happy if Grace harms her brother.

 

Bet he wishes he had gone with his sister shopping right about now.



Author's Response:

He's probably wishing a lot of things, mostly that Roxy would hurry up with the shopping now.

Reviewer: deathshinigami Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 19 2015 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 8: Uninvited Guest

It's ok! Maybe she just wanted to ask for a favor! Or she just has crush on him! Or he's fucked.



Author's Response:

If it was one of those first 2 things you suggested, the story would probably end much faster than it's going to.

Reviewer: Jimbob Signed [Report This]
Date: April 19 2015 9:57 AM Title: Chapter 8: Uninvited Guest

Does Grace make it a habit of breaking into houses of other members of the magical community and harrassing their children?



Author's Response:

She actually didn't have to break into any houses in that first story, but in this case, pretty much yes.

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