Date: May 10 2015 1:04 AM Title: The Wrong Foot
Uh oh! Things are gonna get ugly now that George and Edmund are joining in! The way I see it, Dawn isn't expecting anyone, and she IS a klutz. Her dancing around too focused on Graham, Edmund or George scamper near her feet, on wrong move and SMUSH! Now I don't think that will happen but it IS possible...Anyway, great chapter, we haven't had an update from you in a while (not that I'm one to talk)!
Author's Response:
A very adorable klutz at times but you have a point.
Anything could happen at the place they're going to so I won't rule out George or Edmund getting hurt.
I plan to finish my stories before I start on my new school year so hopefully that means finishing BFG,Downtrodden and The Escape, then I can work on completely new stories!
[Report This]Date: May 09 2015 11:25 AM Title: The Wrong Foot
Great chapter and you do have to feel sorry for Dawn. She only wants to dance like a normal person but the fact that she is more that 194 feet above average height does pose a problem.
Author's Response:
Plus her track record would entail the school creating rules to prevent any accidents, the last thing they want is Dawn to accidentally step on someone.