Date: May 25 2015 11:55 AM Title: Reflections and Reparations
Great final chapter and a great way to leave the reader wanting more. BTW, poor Lucky.
OhLucky will be fine, he's a strong but sensitive guy. Plus he does have a tendency to do things to get a cuddle from Dawn.
Date: May 25 2015 11:45 AM Title: Cold Feet
Sweet chapter, dawn can be such a girl at times! And that ending teaser, I'm looking forward to that story, it seems Jessica might have done some things shes not too proud of in the past.
Yeah she can be one. What Jessica did was actually covered in the main story, so you can reread it and see what she did.It's the arc where she got captured in Doloria during a routine mission.
Date: May 16 2015 10:50 PM Title: Under the Moon and Stars
Great chapter! I really loved this one, I can see that Dawn and Graham are getting further along in their relationship...I wonder where this will take George. I hope Dawn doesn't see something in the guy, because really Graham is the one that has stuck with her through thick and thin. That kiss was pointing towards Dawn seeing him as more than a friend...
And lets not forget that horrible incident with the peanuts, to be honest I don't think I'd ever forgive that if I were Dawn, but obviously she's a better person than me. Anyway, the BFG after series you've been doing is steadily rising in my books as some of your better stories! Hope you keep diping in the BFG universe, I'll be looking forward to more updates from you!
They're going somewhere alright, they just don't know where yet. George will make things interesting too.
I don't have that many stories, 6 at this point but 8 if you count the Escape series I deleted but thanks ,I'm trying my best to create something wonderful here with The Doctor. Although after this summer I hope to add another 2, be it from BFG, Escape or Intersizables.
I've got a lot planned for this, just been too slow in the updates for this because of schoolwork and overloading myself with 3 stories at once. A year in college has more or less helped me decide how I will manage my story time. Just need to sustain the momentum I've got right now.
Date: May 10 2015 1:04 AM Title: The Wrong Foot
Uh oh! Things are gonna get ugly now that George and Edmund are joining in! The way I see it, Dawn isn't expecting anyone, and she IS a klutz. Her dancing around too focused on Graham, Edmund or George scamper near her feet, on wrong move and SMUSH! Now I don't think that will happen but it IS possible...Anyway, great chapter, we haven't had an update from you in a while (not that I'm one to talk)!
A very adorable klutz at times but you have a point.
Anything could happen at the place they're going to so I won't rule out George or Edmund getting hurt.
I plan to finish my stories before I start on my new school year so hopefully that means finishing BFG,Downtrodden and The Escape, then I can work on completely new stories!
Date: May 09 2015 11:25 AM Title: The Wrong Foot
Great chapter and you do have to feel sorry for Dawn. She only wants to dance like a normal person but the fact that she is more that 194 feet above average height does pose a problem.
Plus her track record would entail the school creating rules to prevent any accidents, the last thing they want is Dawn to accidentally step on someone.
Date: March 06 2015 5:41 PM Title: Cold Feet
Wow so douchebag George is in love with Dawn!? This is already too interesting! Especially after the horrible prank he pulled in the last story!
Sometimes the person having a crush is the last person you expect but your bully crushing on you is certainly something I haven't seen since Hey Arnold!
Date: March 06 2015 11:21 AM Title: Cold Feet
Great as always. We delving deeper into Dawn's relationship with Graham and we see that he isn't the only one with an eye for her.
Yeah, it'll be interesting to see how the dynamic between the two gets affected by George's feelings for Dawn.