Reviewer: Smushed Boy Signed [Report This]
Date: March 11 2015 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 3

Nice story! Again you are using a pretty style. After read the mention about Judy Stevens, I figured she using other people in her shoes than Scott.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading/reviewing!

Reviewer: HectorVanDyne Signed [Report This]
Date: March 09 2015 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 3

I also wouldn't mind seeing Mark enjoying himself in one of his activities with his mom or sister.  They don't seem to want to scare him after all.

Author's Response:

"Enjoyment" may be tough since he'd rather not be shrunken, though he'll probably be a happier camper in a future installment as long as people aren't standing on him the whole time.

Reviewer: HectorVanDyne Signed [Report This]
Date: March 09 2015 10:35 AM Title: Chapter 3

Great story,  i really enjoyed it and hope we see these characters again.  I was a little confused why Joy didn't realize that he couldn't fight back because she was putting too much pressure on him though. 

 

And for next time, i wouldn't mind if it was something mundane like helping clean her sister's feet.

Author's Response:

Thanks much. I will probably bring the characters back again, especially since they fit well into short stories like this. And Joy was just being a little too thorough to fully realize.

That may well be a situation explored in any future stuff with these characters.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 09 2015 8:04 AM Title: Chapter 3

So Becky took Mark as  personal stylist. cute story! 

Author's Response:

Thanks! And that's an accurate title for Mark.