Reviewer: combine45 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 09 2015 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Confrontation

Wow he got off scot free. I kinda see what you are doing here with the gender roles. She thinks Alex is just an weak easily manipulated small "man" lol. Its working pretty well, I wonder how things will go with Ash in the future though. Elise forgave Alex, but I feel like if she ran into Ash without him there she would beat her to the ground.

Author's Response:

Yeah I did a rewrite that hopefully flows a little better and didn't make his sins feel quite so egregious. They still are to us, of course, but things are not the same for the infected since gender dynamics are so different from ours.

Thanks for the feedback! Always nice to know how other people interpret the story.