[Report This]Date: April 30 2023 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
One of my favorite stories, you really nailed it. If you weren't such a good writer it could have been repetitive but your writing just grips the reader and holds him in this horrible situation. I'm not a great fan of death so I would like to imagine a happy ending where the little brother actually rescues his big brother, but this is still a magnificent story as it is.
[Report This]Date: April 08 2022 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great story. On the surface it's a very simple story, but your writing makes all the difference. This is a story that lingers in your head. I hope you return to writing.
[Report This]Date: February 22 2015 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
Do you know what amazes me and impresses me the most about your writing?
No need to guess; I'll tell you. It's your ability to write both story like A Fly on The Wall, with its humor and Douglas Adams style jokes, and this story right here, with powerful emotions and palpable terror. I'm not afraid to admit that I'm extremely envious of that.
Everytime I see a new story from you, I can't help but think, "Oh goody! Sickpuppies updated!" Please, keep up the good work.
Author's Response:
That is such a nice complement. Truly, thank you.
[Report This]Date: February 22 2015 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
I am both jealous and enthralled by your ability to write male giants with such eloquence. It’s rare these days to find an author who will even touch this genre, and I applaud you for not only doing it, but doing it with finesse. Please continue, and in whatever direction you see fit.
That being said, I do feel the need to offer some light constructive criticism; which is more nitpicking than anything else. My solitary concern is that I felt that you could have added just a bit more detail on the shape and condition of the shoe; as well as a few other details such as if he wearing socks and such. Just my personal take; feel free to disregard.
Tl;dr version: keep doing what you do. ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you for the complements, and as always, criticism is always appreciated. For this story I wanted to focus more on the emotional parts of it, which is why I didn't put a lot of detail into describing the shoes.
Date: February 21 2015 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 1
Just an adding after reading the review of Skechers... please dont. Please dont do this unbelievable thing people always plead, which is the most rude thing you could do. Please dont destroy this amazing story by turning it into another gts story, which are 99.998% of the stories on this site. If he wants to read the 99.998% other stories he can, but please leave the 0.002% for the few people enjoying reading male normal sized characters too from time to time. It's just there is no real platform for both pairings, and dont get me wrong, I enjoy both, but I also am really glad, that a few authors from time to time write in a very very rare niche, for the few people who desperatly try to look for these kind of stories, and never find them. And then it's even more rude, if people say "amazing story, but please change/add it into an ordinary gts plot like all the other stories on here^^".
Author's Response:
I understand your frustration Zol, though I don’t think that asking for anything is really that bad. Still, as a fan of male giants who so rarely gets to see a story with them, I feel your pain.
Honestly, don’t worry about any giantess parts getting added in. I appreciate the recommendations and requests, but this time I wanted to write a story that I wanted.
Date: February 20 2015 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 1
The descriptions are great. The level of unawareness is extreme. Awesome job. I hope some sneaker clad women join in on the fun!
Author's Response:
thank you, but, probably (definatley) not going to add any women. Sorry
[Report This]Date: February 19 2015 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
Enjoyed this a lot!! I love unaware transformation plots!
Author's Response:
thanks
[Report This]Date: February 19 2015 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 1
Amazing plot, really well written, really really well. I was surprised seeing male giant/normal sized themed stories, which doesnt happen so often on here, but totally is such a nice surprise. Plot and narrator wise awesome, was fun so far to read. It's a lot better than most stories on here, which lack proper grammar and tenses, because a story has to be in past tense. I hate it so much that I cant favorite this or add you as an author... I guess I would need to make a new account, it's somehow bugged for me and I am stuck at 19 and cant delete or add anything. Keep up the great work!! It's so great to see/know an author enyoing to write male giant plots too. I love the character a lot you came up with and I totally was able to imagine him in the room, just staying there making something to eat or what he does, and for him it's just a minor change of moving of his shoes, but for the ants it's a hellish experience. You totally wrote it out in such a great way that the reader could picture the scene in his head. Loved the part how you wrote about the other ant totally becomming ant, loved how the boy wears his sport shoes which had a flat rubbery sole, which would literally reduce the ants to a thin film of slime, just maybe a leg or antenna twisting or being glued to the underside of the shoe when it slowly lifts again. Loving the story a lot already :)
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review, and I’m glad you liked it. Ever since I started writing I’ve been trying to work on my grammar and such, so I’m glad to see that it has actually paid off!