[Report This]Date: August 22 2016 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 4: Getting to Know You
I appreciate her cuteness, both in physique and mannerism, along with the occasional reminder of her sheer size. I like how this is playing itself out, in general. It's a fun read and I care what happens next.
Author's Response:
Cute is what i aim for :)
Date: January 27 2015 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 4: Getting to Know You
Not a big baseball fan, I like the genre of story you're writing in, gentle/loyal is something I can dig. I like the lines that this chapter is going along, what with the in-depth character write up, and his reassurance that he's a killer. I look forward to your chapters.
Author's Response:
Thanks! The matt being a killer thing is something i'll harp on a bit later. Thank you for the review, and im glad you enjoyed it!
Date: January 27 2015 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 4: Getting to Know You
Dude, you KNOW this story isnt bad...its not the best thing i have ever read but its pretty good, if a little cliche so far
Author's Response:
man how boring would not being cheesy be though for reals. thanks for the kind words.