Date: May 21 2021 6:44 AM Title: Sibling Bond
Nice story. I liked the foot and shoe stuff. Keep it up
[Report This]Date: May 17 2015 12:27 PM Title: Crime and Punishment
Great to see this story back. The idea of turning into a bug is an interesting question. After reading this chapter I went back and read read the last couple chapters, not sure if Simone is lying in this chapter bc of Dr Arnold or if she was lying the first time around about the overloading bit. Either way looking forward to next chapter
Date: May 16 2015 10:16 PM Title: Triumvirate Sciences
Hope I can read the new chapters soon
Date: May 16 2015 10:14 PM Title: Crime and Punishment
I wonder why she lies?then I will never be transformed back until my sister find the truth in the end?
And I can be transformed into food if my sister really want to get rid of me
[Report This]Date: May 13 2015 3:39 AM Title: Triumvirate Sciences
I've never really considered myself as being interested in transformation, but this story has gone a long way in converting me. I like the dynamic between the two characters, although I feel your writing style can use a little more polishing (which could easily be honed with me writing). You're clearly very talented.
I agree with another reviewer about the protagonist being transformed into food. Keep up the great work, and thanks for a wonderful read!
Date: May 11 2015 10:48 PM Title: Triumvirate Sciences
wow~ I love transform stories very much, and what about to tf into foods next time as the pubishment? :)
I hope to see the next chapter really soon!
[Report This]Date: May 11 2015 10:28 PM Title: Triumvirate Sciences
I hope to see the next chapter really soon!
[Report This]Date: May 10 2015 2:40 PM Title: Operation: Overload
Ohhhh crap! I can't wait for the next chapter, the story has been amazing so far!
[Report This]Date: May 10 2015 11:07 AM Title: Triumvirate Sciences
Hey, it's great to see you return to this great story. I hope you are able to continue producng new chapters. Don't worry about writer's block; whatever you muster out will likely be just fine. One hope I have is that the main charachter simply begin shrinking to a tiny size without necessarily morphing into an ojbect or clothing particle. I think being human and tiny at Summer's feet would be interesting to see. And punishing as hell for him.
[Report This]Date: April 03 2015 2:26 PM Title: Truce?
It's awesome to see another chapter! If I were him, I would be flipping out knowing summer would kill me when I got home if she found out. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: April 03 2015 12:05 AM Title: Triumvirate Sciences
One of the greatest stories i've read
Date: April 02 2015 6:47 PM Title: Triumvirate Sciences
Good chapter. I'm really a big fan of this story. There just isn't enough transformation on this site. Hopefully, you'll see this story to the end. A good story shouldn't be abandoned, and by god, this one is a goody.
[Report This]Date: April 02 2015 6:09 PM Title: Truce?
Great to see this story back on the Most Recent Page. For a moment there I thought Simone would help him overload it, but then again that's not the name of the story. Hopeing the story isn't coming to a close already, feels like it's only just began. Look forward to the next chapter.
Date: February 13 2015 11:11 AM Title: Triumvirate Sciences
AWESOME story! It's not neccesarily the detail you focus on, you just say the right words at the RIGHT time. Authors like Charles Dickens sum up a whole paragraph in one sentence and you feel you're getting the same detail (and you're doing great at it!). Not a fan of the whole incest thing. Great trick as a reader is to pretend step/sister/brother.
[Report This]Date: February 10 2015 2:11 PM Title: Summer's plaything
Nice!
Date: February 10 2015 5:04 AM Title: A Day at the Mall
Great story so far! I love the way you keep a qucik rhythm but still make time for those little details that really pulls the reader into the moment. Awesome story!
[Report This]Date: February 09 2015 7:36 PM Title: Summer's plaything
Great take on the transformation angle!
[Report This]Date: February 09 2015 3:49 PM Title: Summer's plaything
This chapper was worth the wait. Really like how Summer reacted. Look forward to the next one, even if it isn't planned. Wonder what if will be like for him as other types of Summers footwear.
[Report This]Date: February 09 2015 3:36 PM Title: Triumvirate Sciences
Yes!! You made him into panties!! PLEASE do it again soon! The butt is the best part! Maybe since he hates bad smells she could fart on him all day for disobeying her.. But I'd love to see it happen again!! I love this story and I love your writing! Please keep this going and keep the chapters just as long as the last one please??!! Booty booty booty!!! :)
Date: February 01 2015 12:54 PM Title: A Job Offer
i'm a big fan of unaware stories. i hope this stays so.