[Report This]Date: March 22 2019 3:08 AM Title: Love Is In The Air
What a great story again! I never would know that it was Bobby who's shrinking people for his cousin!
I did read people reviewing your stories and giving less starts because it "doesn't have so much vore" and all, but for me you story is very well balanced! I'm reading all the voreverse stories as if I was reading some suspense book. For a so well developed plot as this one, I guess the vore action is in the exactly right level. Well, for me those teens burp a little too much (they burp for an empty stomach, for a full tomach, when filling stomach, when talking.........), but it doesn't count as the story's so good!
Again, I can't wait to read the next stories!
[Report This]Date: February 07 2015 4:21 PM Title: Love Is In The Air
Ahh! :-) Cant wait for the final chapter!! I know I shouldnt but still hoping for some ideas used in the final one!! Really liked the idea of the couple finding the box of where Bobby kept the shrink ray in, didnt think of that possibility. And I guess Tommy isnt a goner right, he'll mostly ride on that burp out into freedem again haha, or is still glued somehow in her mouth with some spit near her esophagus entrance. Really clever and interesting cliffhanger there in the bathroom!! I guess stupid Bobby knocked himself out by smashing his head against the wall lol. Now it's up to Simon taking the shrink ray from him, find somehow Tommy, grow him back and let Tommy decicde what to do with Bobby ;p Loved the part where even Tommy was near of being consumed getting a slightly boner from the view of his gf. Really great story and Im sure the final chapter will be epic !!! <3
Author's Response:
Thanks! I;ll have chapter 5 up next week!
Date: January 31 2015 2:04 PM Title: Love Is In The Air
I re-sent it, did you get it this time? If not just write your mail in here or sent me a message over here (:
Author's Response:
jasonsalisbury2@hotmail.com Try that.
Date: January 24 2015 5:53 PM Title: Love Is In The Air
Hello! I am interested what'll happen next! And I can see why Bobby shrank them, his friends were being a bit inconsiderate when his girlfriend got eaten right before his eyes. Poor guy. Plus Tommy did start to date the unaware murderer of Bobby's girlfriend... If that happened to me, (I'm a girl so it would be vice versa) I would feel a bit more than petty anger. But nonetheless, your writing is quite good and the plot is interesting (I usually hate vore and GTS but your story is one that has me hooked! Kudos to you~! Adieu! ^_^
-Arianna
Author's Response:
Glad your hooked and that you like Bobby's motivations. Thank you very much for reviewing and Ill do my best to keep the story interesting!
[Report This]Date: January 20 2015 8:49 AM Title: Love Is In The Air
Nice!!! Great to see you back, this looks really promising already! I loved your last story so much, especially for Tommy and his new gf and the ending chapter was just the best. So great to see a sequel to the plot to come :-)
Author's Response:
Thanks! I hope you enjoy the new chapter too, I just put it up!
[Report This]Date: January 17 2015 6:29 PM Title: Love Is In The Air
Heeey :') Finally, youre back!! So excited already, and of course, as promised, I will review from here to the end. I cant really give more stars because I dont know where it's going from here, but because I know your other work, Ill start with a 8 :3 I would really like to give wishes and ideas for the next chapters, but you said you dont want to hear that and you mostly have already planed the whole story :( I would love it much more if you try to build in wishes and ideas, for example your final chapter of your last story was so great of how you implemented those cup ideas with Tommy and Simon. But coming back to this story, I loved so much already how Jenny was clueless and even talked in a rude way about Francine in front of Tommy and Simon, not knowing she sent her on a one way trip through her digestive tract: “I have cute friend named Crystal who Bobby might like, ever since Francine left him,” Jenny said. She let out a soft belch, then covered her mouth and giggled. Also loved how Bobby was really pissed about the fact Tommy and Simon not really cared about what happened to Francine, and how Tommy didnt break up with Jenny after what "she did". I hope so much Bobby gets swallowed too in this story, it would be a fitting ending for him. I know you said you didnt like male vore much but still hope doesnt left me (: Im not sure what to think about the upcoming location because of that Love Bite reference and a tripple date. Thats not much a critism just a personal taste, I dont really like locations like cafes/burger places or restaurants much in a vore story. But it's so nice you finally back :)) And Im sure the story will come out great as all of your work. Hope this review cheers you up :)) Have a nice Sunday!!
Author's Response:
Thanks! It's not that I don't like your ideas for future chapters and stuff, its just that i've got most of this story worked out already and I'm actually pretty excited where its going to go! They're will be lots and lots of unaware vore, but the restaurant is the main setting. You'll see why and I think it will still work, but once again thanks for reviewing! It really means a lot to me that you always give feedback on my chapters no matter what! Now Im going to go write the second chapter!