Date: March 09 2015 7:38 PM Title: The Tomboy and Her Revenge
This is good, but we need more feet. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response:
thanks! I will try to include more feet related stuff soon.
[Report This]Date: March 09 2015 10:57 AM Title: The Tomboy and Her Revenge
Interesting concept. I'm looking forward to your future chapters
Author's Response:
Thanks! I hope to bring out my chapters quick... But I am not a fast writer so i doubt it.
Date: March 04 2015 3:09 AM Title: The Tomboy and Her Revenge
YOOOOOOOOOOO!! I really love your stories, you're one of the best hen it comes to extreme micro/nano !! There ain't a lot of writers like you, in fact very few. I'm following you bones and soul please continue this one for long you can do a looooooooooot with this concept don't waste it man !!
Author's Response:
Thanks for your support, I will try to keep this story interesting for as long as I can, admittedly I will have some lazy moments since having 50 planets being destroyed could amount to a ton of writers blocks, but I will try to make everything as interesting as possible even when I am being lazy. I hope you enjoy what I have in the future chapters.
[Report This]Date: March 03 2015 10:21 AM Title: The Tomboy and Her Revenge
Great work! I really like that you included a size changing element to the story. Aside from some grammatical errors and typos, It's an enjoyable read.
On a personal note, I hope that you might add some element of direct, physical interaction between the 'microns' and the girls (as opposed to indirectly as has been). I can imagine that the size changing machine could deliver this.
Author's Response:
I do have some sort of physical interaction with tinies planned for the future, but to be honest it won't be much. I am also disappointed that I am still making grammatical mistakes and typos, i will try to notice my errors in the future and hope that I can overcome the hurdle of proper grammar and punctuation.
[Report This]Date: March 03 2015 8:48 AM Title: The Tomboy and Her Revenge
Absolutely superb! If we could get move of these kinds of creative methods for ending the planets, I'll be overjoyed. Unaware would be amazing too. Maybe some butt action?
Author's Response:
thanks! There will be some more unaware and butt action soon.
[Report This]Date: March 03 2015 2:17 AM Title: The Tomboy and Her Revenge
Really awesome. I find it funny that you apologize for a large chapter when large chapters are the best. As long as they're interesting and don't waffle on. This was certainly interesting. I loved the nose scene since it's quite rare to see stuff like that. I'm curious as to what other fetishes you'll add to this story. There are so many to choose from and they'd all make awesome chapters. Keep it up =)
Author's Response:
I always had the impression that long chapters were in someway intimidating to readers LOL. I have always loved nose vore. It is different and I hardly ever see it done in both stories and pictures, so i decided to show people how sexy it could be. I have some interesting ideas from certain fetishes that I will be including soon, I hope they will be well received.
Date: February 27 2015 3:45 AM Title: The Tomboy and Her Revenge
MOOOOOOOORE
Date: February 11 2015 5:14 PM Title: The Tomboy and Her Revenge
MORE MORE MORE!
Author's Response:
I started writing the third chapter and hope to bring it out soon, since I don't plan to make it as long as my last two chapters. I hate that I am a slow writer, but all the comments are encouraging me and i hope to bring out the next chapter as quickly as possible.
[Report This]Date: January 28 2015 4:30 AM Title: The Tomboy and Her Revenge
That second chapter was quite good and makes me look forward to the next. I'm curious to see what you have up your sleeve and I'm sure whatever it is will be great. One of the only problems I could find with this chapter was your spelling of "Resources" but aside from that everything was delightful.
Author's Response:
I am glad that you are enjoyed the second chapter and that you have high hopes for what I come up with in the future. I didn't realize that I was messing up the word resources, i will fix that and pay more attention to how I write in the future.
[Report This]Date: January 26 2015 8:36 PM Title: The Tomboy and Her Revenge
I know this story doesn't have a scat tag on it but I really hope Raquel or one of her friends end up pooping on one of the planets :D
Author's Response:
Thanks for the rating. After writing the second chapter I was thinking that someone might want some scat, but I might have to do that for another story since the story doesn't have a scat tag, but if there is enough support for it, then I will consider adding scat in a future chapter along with a tag.
Date: January 19 2015 3:33 AM Title: The Tomboy and Her Revenge
A unique and excellent idea for a story, and the execution so far is pretty good. I will be cheering you on and giving you encouragement so you don't lose steam and hopefully help you reach your full potential on this one. It's such a wonderful idea. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Thanks, I am glad you find my idea and execution for this story good. I will try hard to push myself to not only finish, but make this an enjoyable piece.
[Report This]Date: January 18 2015 11:06 AM Title: The Tomboy and Her Revenge
I already love the story and will continue to eagerly read updates in the future.
Author's Response:
I am a huge fan of your work, just had to put that out there before anything else I write. I am glad that you like the story so far and I will try my hardest to make this story great and I will try to update regularly to not keep the readers waiting. I hope you enjoy what I have planned for the future.
[Report This]Date: January 17 2015 4:41 PM Title: The Tomboy and Her Revenge
I love this kind of scenario, the plot is interesting with a lot of potential. Personally, I find very exciting the talk between the giantess and the little defenseless people before the physical/material interaction, as when she begins to make some damage. Thank you very much for sharing your story whith us, I can't wait to see more...
Author's Response:
I am glad that you can see the potential that this story has. If you are into a giantess belittling the tinies, then you will love what is going to happen soon, things are going to be humiliating and cruel for the tiny people soon. I hope you enjoy the story and support it till the end and I will try my best to keep make this story the best I have ever made and hopefully make it a favorite for many readers.
Date: January 17 2015 3:57 AM Title: The Tomboy and Her Revenge
I created an account just for this story. I really enjoyed the first chapter ! I'm a big fan of your work :) Keep going !
Author's Response:
it means alot to me that you created an account for my story. I am encouraged to write more and better when people like you enjoy my work. I will try to make this story a great piece of work, so I hope you will enjoy it til its end.
Date: January 16 2015 9:14 PM Title: The Tomboy and Her Revenge
I'm liking the start. Personally, I'd rather have it be more convenient than drag on forever, although that's not necessarily a bad thing if it is done well. Also, I agree that Raquel should be figuring out what the spheres are soon. Keep it up. I hope you can stick with this story to the end!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the comment and Raquel will know what the spheres are next chapter, which is when the real fun begins. I will try my hardest to keep this story going, while trying to keep a decent standard of quality. i hope you enjoy what comes next and that you stick with the story to the end.
Date: January 16 2015 1:55 PM Title: The Tomboy and Her Revenge
Hmm, slightly offended but that's not the purpose of reviews. I find the premise of this story interesting and has a lot of potential if enough work is put into it. Now onto things that will make this story better. The biggest and easiest thing is to add an extra blank line in between paragraphs and conversations. This helps us, the readers, when we are going from one line to the next. The biggest problem that I had personally is that everything is too convenient. I could see finding the guy at night far away but to find a guy walking around in daylight in a noticeable suit was weird. The last critique would be making the girl have more common sense. She believes in Elite 50, knows the guy works for them and sees 50 small spheres but doesn't know what they are. Other than that I'd say you've came up with a good story with the ability to branch of in any direction. It'll be interesting to see how someone can destroy 47 planets in 47 different ways.
Author's Response:
Sorry about offending you and I will consider fixing the spacing issue to make things easy to read. As for how convenient everything is, this is done on purpose. The chapter was becoming longer than I expected and I just wanted to get to the meat of the story instead of being more meticulous about the plot flow. I also never said she counted the spheres, she is still unaware that there are 50 of them and no one knows the planets are tiny, so I didn't think that she would even consider that the spheres are in fact planets, I doubt anyone would. But I am still glad to have a review none the less and I will try to make the story better in the future and come up with interesting ways to destroy the planets.