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Reviewer: Shrunken Fanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 15 2016 1:10 AM Title: The Tomboy and Her Revenge

Alright, appreciate the update and I am willing to wait if it guarantees a strong and epic finish to a great story!

If you need ideas though, I'm still standing by my very first comment of more nipple insertion/possible lactation action! Also, perhaps the last planet or micro survivors aren't actually destroyed but are just left permanently doomed inside the depths of one of the girls bodies, I imagine that would make for a much more epic ending than another quick wipeout.

 

Just suggestions I was thinking off the top of my head, hopefully you make more stories similar to this one after you clear your writer's block! You're an awesome author and I would love to see more works like this from you in the future!

Reviewer: Shrunken Fanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 10 2016 3:42 AM Title: The Tomboy and Her Revenge

Hopefully you give us an amazing conclusion to this epic story, I've been periodically checking for the past few months waiting for another chapter! Thank you again!



Author's Response:

Sorry about falliing behind on this. I have been busy with other stories and collages and sadly I lost some interest in this story, but I hope to get the nerve again to finish off the last 2-3 chapters.

Reviewer: coolk17 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 27 2015 3:34 PM Title: The Tomboy and Her Revenge

MOOOOORRRREEEEEE!!!

 

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Date: November 03 2015 1:24 PM Title: The Tomboy and Her Revenge

Where is the rest? x)

Reviewer: coolk17 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 15 2015 10:13 PM Title: The Tomboy and Her Revenge

MORE!

Reviewer: Shrunken Fanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2015 11:56 AM Title: The Tomboy and Her Revenge

 

Glad that you're still making more chapters, I'm always checking every week or so to see if there's new stuff added to it! Just wanted to say again that you're a great writer and this story is Grade A in my book!



Author's Response:

Thanks a ton for your kind words. I will continue to try hard and add more chapters until this story ends.

Reviewer: GTS-Langley Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 28 2015 9:40 AM Title: The Tomboy and Her Revenge

To be honest, I made an account just to say THANK YOU for creating a masterpiece for us readers to enjoy. Although I am generally a ass and insertion guy, I really enjoy reading your story even though it is mostly feet and vore.

Style- 5/5

Story- 5/5

Authors AWESOMENESS - 10/5

Take your time if it means that the quality of the chapter is higher. I will look forward to read your other stories! CHEERS



Author's Response:

WOW! I am at a lost for words on how much I appreciate your kind post. I am sorry there is not a lot of insertion or ass play. They are not my strong points, but I really should expand on those things to please more than my feet and vore audience. I am glad you are enjoying the story so far and hopefully my future chapters. I already have two chapters in mind where insertion and ass play will take place, hopefully I will do it well enough to please the audience looking forward to those things.

Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 27 2015 5:24 PM Title: The Tomboy and Her Revenge

Another superb update. Looking forward to the next one!

I'd personally like to see more planets and inhabitants survive longer - I love the idea in this chapter of thousands of people surviving amongsr the damo fibres of a girl's sock or between her toes, and previously entirr landmasses adhering to the snot and hairs in a girls's nose as she goes about her day to day life. Maybe a couple planets could be strategically placed, then shrunk to being to small to see and even forgotten about?

 

Also would love some butt stuff. The idea of a planet fitting neatly into a girl's anus before being snapped by it's contraction is amazing. Could even have the tiny germs live on in the wrinkles around the hole, and perhaps on the walls inside...



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.

I would allow some of the planets and inhabitants to survive, but I can't for story purposes, since the girls fear the Elite 50 making contact with any normal sized people who could help them, so they want to get rid of them all with no survivors. Yet I do like the living on the wrinkles idea, it might be something I include during my next story.

I hope the next chapter will be up to your liking and that you continue to give it your support, once again thanks for the comment. I love to hear what the readers think of the chapter and what they think I should include to make the story better. Some ideas will be included in this current story while other ideas will be a driving force in my future stories.

Reviewer: coolk17 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 19 2015 12:23 PM Title: The Tomboy and Her Revenge

waiting....

Reviewer: coolk17 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 29 2015 12:56 PM Title: The Tomboy and Her Revenge

Thank you for the update, can't wait for more feet feet feet. Please talk about feet sweat, the smell and the toes. This is gonna be good. Why don't you post this on giantess city?



Author's Response:

Feet is my favorite subject when it comes to giantess stories, so as a fellow feet lover I will try to make the next chapter a feet fanatics dream.

I would post this on Giantess city, but I believe Chloe would be considered underage which goes against Giantess city's policies, at least that was the rule when I used to frequent there. I also had some bad experiences on Giantess city when I was first starting as a collager and saw many people treated badly on that site and decided to not post on there.

Reviewer: Twilight Sparkle Signed [Report This]
Date: June 18 2015 12:58 AM Title: The Tomboy and Her Revenge

Hey you! Just checking in to see how you're doing! I'm super excited for the next chapter, and hope it comes out soon! ^^

Hooefully your real life situation is going well, whatever it may be :p

Author's Response:

I am currently working on the next chapter and I hope to post it up early next week. I know it has been a while but I hope I deliver something you and all the readers will enjoy to make up for my lack of updates.

Reviewer: coolk17 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 10 2015 9:51 AM Title: The Tomboy and Her Revenge

more

Reviewer: Twilight Sparkle Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11 2015 12:32 AM Title: The Tomboy and Her Revenge

I really like this story man! But real life comes first; and I'd rather have a good story than a rushed bad story :p

You're awesome dude! Keep up the good work c:

Author's Response:

Thanks! i have some more free time so I hope to be more frequent and I will try not to rush this story at any time so that I may keep it at a good level of quality, so that the readers can enjoy this story to the fullest.

Reviewer: coolk17 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07 2015 6:16 PM Title: The Tomboy and Her Revenge

R.I.P



Author's Response:

I am glad you like the story and want to read the next part, but these type of comments won't make chapters come any faster. I know you might mean well,but it feels almost like I am being forced and rushed to write as opposed to having the fans, I wish to please with all I have, support the story and be understanding of when I can't bring things out as quickly as other writers. I love writing, but real life takes priority over my hobbies and I hope in the future you could be more patient. 

Reviewer: coolk17 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 01 2015 1:47 PM Title: The Tomboy and Her Revenge

Is this dead?



Author's Response:

No it is still alive, I just haven't gotten around to it lately, but I will hopefully bring out the next part soon.

Reviewer: coolk17 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 27 2015 11:56 AM Title: The Tomboy and Her Revenge

MOOOOORRRREEEEEE!!!

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Date: April 07 2015 7:38 AM Title: The Tomboy and Her Revenge

Waiting for more. I hope to see lots more feet.

Reviewer: Big_n_evil Signed [Report This]
Date: April 06 2015 11:06 PM Title: The Tomboy and Her Revenge

Holy heck!  Nipple vore?  That's an amazing concept!  This is a great story and I can't wait to see where you take it to next, especially what a stone-cold psychopath like Reika has in store for them!



Author's Response:

Thanks! I was kind of iffy on the nipple vore thing, since I didn't know if readers would like it, but it seems to have become well liked and I am glad readers like you appreciate it. I hope Reika's chapter meets your expectation of what she is capable of.

Reviewer: Shrunken Fanatic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 26 2015 3:12 AM Title: The Tomboy and Her Revenge

I just wanted to say that the nipple insertion was something both new and very exciting to read. Best thing I have read in a long time! I would very much love to see it or something similar done again, even if it's in a different story (one suggestion that comes to mind is perhaps a young mother who can lactate). Anyways I think this story is getting better with each chapter and I look forward to reading more, keep up the good work!



Author's Response:

I am glad you are enjoying the story so far and I am also glad that the nipple vore/insertion is appreciated. I will most likely add the scenario you want to see in a future story, I was thinking I want to have some lactation action, but I have no young mothers in this story so I will include it in a future story.

Reviewer: christiawi9 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 26 2015 12:55 AM Title: The Tomboy and Her Revenge

Awesome. This story never ceases to entertain. At first I thought you were going to standard deaths which was a bit sad but that last one was really creative. Being inserted into a nipple? Amazing. Does that count as nipple vore? Anyway, I hope you keep coming up with creative and humiliating deaths. Can't wait to see the next chapter. Do you know if it's coming out soon or not? 



Author's Response:

I am glad the nipple vore was appreciated. I wanted to do something different and I am glad readers like you like the weird things i am adding to this story. I will try to keep the story interesting and come up with interesting ways for the girls to dispose of the planets.

I would hope to bring out the next chapter soon, but sadly I doubt it would be up quickly since I have not even started the chapter yet, but I do know everything I want to include so hopefully I could crank it out fast.

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