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Reviewer: InkPatch Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 08 2015 10:25 AM Title: The Discovery

Some of the dialogue seems a bit rushed and the imagery could use some more detail.

Reviewer: mrcool Signed [Report This]
Date: January 02 2015 12:24 PM Title: The Discovery

Love the first chapter! I hope Jade gets a heavy does of Elise's giant feet.  Please continue!

Reviewer: zbh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 30 2014 9:44 PM Title: The Discovery

It's a good start! I hope you continue soon!

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