Date: January 04 2015 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 4
I am confused. Wouldn't the maids notice a bulge in Edith's sock? Surely her underwear, bra or panties, is a more sensible place and less nauseating for Cole (because the incessant movement of her foot would surely cause sickness). Which brings me to another point – Cole is too young and innocent to understand female anatomy so there is no chance of him being perverted. Cole has a certain cuteness to him, which I hope is emphasized in later chapters - as it makes him a fairly unique main character for a Giantess World story.
Author's Response:
Well remember how small Cole was in porportion to Edith. The little bulge he may have formed would have been completly missed by the maids, despite their keen eyes. And one of my debates while I was writing this was Cole's age, but I ultimately decided younger would be better. I wanted the bonde between the two of them to be like that between siblings, to create an illussion of purity for their characters (especially Edith's).