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Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: January 04 2015 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 3

Oh snap - Cole is the missing tiny! This chapter was surprisingly tense. Nice work on this one. I personally would have liked to have explored Cole and Ediths relationship a bit more beforehand though.



Author's Response:

I decided that the adventure the two would go on would better establish the bond between the two, and hopefully filled the reader in on most of the dynamics of their relationship. However, due to time constraints I have a "missing" chapter or two that would have further defined their friendship.

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