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Reviewer: Her-chocolatebar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 25 2015 9:18 AM Title: Trapped in a Pill

One of my trades is as an audio engineer.
I have a very small and very high quality microphone, which might work very well indeed inside such a pill! :)

Reviewer: Kosmita Signed [Report This]
Date: January 12 2015 1:07 AM Title: Trapped in a Pill

Holy hell this was good! I love me some good ol' vore stories. Great scenario too!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! If you enjoy vore stories, check out my other ones, haha. Again, thanks for the comment!

Reviewer: julieshrink Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 23 2014 11:46 AM Title: Trapped in a Pill

Great story !!!

Do more stories like this ...



Author's Response:

Thank you! And I certainly will!

Reviewer: Toxenisfun Signed [Report This]
Date: December 18 2014 9:33 PM Title: Trapped in a Pill

This was a very great read. I did liked the fact that Jessica and the sister swallowed LEDs for the girls to see. I agree, it is a lot sexier when the person sees what is happening. P.S I love the small women getting eaten by large women. It'ssomething that not a lot of people focuse on. Great story.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! It's something you're sure to see more of in the future!

Reviewer: Deadman dead Signed [Report This]
Date: December 18 2014 3:38 PM Title: Trapped in a Pill

It's good but you should mark it as scrat as well

Author's Response:

Thanks. And I did.

Reviewer: Her-chocolatebar Signed [Report This]
Date: December 18 2014 2:41 PM Title: Trapped in a Pill

Hey I meant to say in my other review.
I loved the twist of the sister coming out of nowhere and taking charge completely! haha :)

Reviewer: Her-chocolatebar Signed [Report This]
Date: December 18 2014 2:32 PM Title: Trapped in a Pill

Hey I meant to say in my other review.
I loved the twist of the sister coming out of nowhere and taking charge completely! haha :)

Author's Response:

I love twists like that in the story! It makes it more interesting, I think.

Reviewer: kasa Signed [Report This]
Date: December 18 2014 11:22 AM Title: Trapped in a Pill

I love your stories! I really like the details you put to describe what is going on with the girl inside the stomach and then what happens with her remains.

I was wondering if you can make on of your next stories to involve a couple. E.g. a girl shrinking and swallowing the girlfriend of her crush without him knowing about it, while they have sex, at say, his place. (Could be like a revenge type of thing or getting rid of the competition). The story could focus a bit on how the swallowed girl feels while the couple's having sex.Something along those lines.

Just a suggestion. Anyways, thanks for the great stories.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your kind comment! I truly appreciate it!

I'm sorry, but my stories are going to be strictly about giant women, haha. Giant men are a huge turn-off for me so don't expect any to appear in my stories. Men might shrink and be swallowed in my stories, though!

Reviewer: Her-chocolatebar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 18 2014 7:33 AM Title: Trapped in a Pill

Well they just keep getting better and better! :
i wonder if jenny likes chocolate bars? at least, i wouldn't need a dam light anyway! Haha
oh yes, that story kind of pressed a little button too
i had a girlfriend called Marina, who told me once.
That if she ever found me being unfaithfull to her in any way what so ever?
She had a plan.
I would have time to ponder on my misse domina, and she would give me a a chance to make it up to her unyielding digestion. Haha
secretly though, i must admit that if that is my punishment, i would go out and be totally unfaithfull to her right away!

Author's Response:

Thank you for the comment! A chocolate bar-related story is completely possible!

I can just imagine it: Someone stuck waist-deep in a chocolate bar, unable to move, with a giant woman looming overhead, licking her lips. She picks up the little square of chocolate and gently places it in her mouth, closing it and sealing her tiny victim in darkness...

 

The tiny victim is then slathered in hot spit as the chocolate melts around them, and swallowed down into a tight, hot, slimy tunnel with the rest of the candy to be digested.

 

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