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Reviewer: Shaman Signed [Report This]
Date: August 23 2020 2:11 PM Title: The Candy Box

Really love reading your stories, supernova (I've been on a reading binge the last few days basically haha). I just wanted to say that, outside of the kink aspect, I really dig your detailed fashing of writing and describing characters and scenes, it's all very enjoyable to read as it reads really fluetly

Reviewer: thejoker2445 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 18 2014 2:21 AM Title: The Candy Box

Aw okay well the only other suggestion (literally only; your stories are too perfect to find many complaints) is if you could make one where the woman kidnaps a girl and instead of swallowing her quickly, plays with her in her mouth throughout the day like a piece of gum?



Author's Response:

I always appreciate suggestions. (:

 

And yeah, that sounds like a great possibility for a story! 

 

The tiny woman, confused, disgusted,  and slathered in rank slime becomes gradually more exhausted (physically and emotionally) as she spends hours struggling in the hot, wet mouth of a woman she doesn't even know. She could be naked, feeling the slick taste buds slither against her bare skin as her fingers become pruned and her hair becomes soaked, only to be randomly swallowed when her kidnapper needs to speak to her friend. 

I could totally write a story like that. 

Reviewer: thejoker2445 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 18 2014 1:55 AM Title: The Candy Box

No problem! Have you ever been interested in making one where it's a man shrinking the women? It'd be an interesting mix for a change xD could have him using their bodies to please himself lol. Just a thought. Looking forward to reading your next batch of stories!



Author's Response:

Though I truly appreciate your comments, only expect women doing the shrinking here, haha. I might do another shrunken man story, though!

Reviewer: thejoker2445 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 17 2014 12:57 PM Title: The Candy Box

I swear, all of your stories are just perfect! You have no idea how long I've waited for these kinds of stories and now they finally exist! Keep em coming :)



Author's Response:

Thank you for the kind words! I certainly will keep them coming!

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