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Reviewer: Lost Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 06 2014 10:25 AM Title: The lost ring

Awesome start look foreword to more.

Author's Response:

Thanks everybody for the feedback :)

I'm writing the third chapter. Hopefully I'll post it tomorrow.

Reviewer: DuffyBear Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 06 2014 8:39 AM Title: The lost ring

This is a good start, keep it up.

Reviewer: mrcool Signed [Report This]
Date: December 05 2014 3:22 PM Title: The lost ring

Awesome, awesome, awesome!!!! This story is great so far and I love where it is going.  The whole premise of the story that he is now nothing more than a shrunken tiny insole for his beautiful Aunt and her pretty yet very smelly feet is just fantastic and fascinating.  I do hope she decides to degrade and be very cruel to him like he deserves as the small bug he has become.   Will she share with her sister?  Will she shrink any other victims? Maybe our victims sister to add some f/f spice into this mix??  Just some suggestions.  Can't wait to read more!!

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