Date: June 14 2015 9:34 PM Title: Family Reunion
Franchise Writer, why you not consider me a fan! (Jk) Love how I predicted up till end fight scene. Mavis was a surprise and made it much better. I swear, if you had gone down my thought process only, I would have been disappointed. (That and also asking if you a Psionic Person from Space. Lol). Really great and hope to see Flair at some point. Also, see if you can add Sue and/or Millianna in. Would be interesting. Also, try to avoid Bisca (Please).
Author's Response:
I do consider you a fan senator, i'm not sure why i wouldn't xD
I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter, and i'd expect to see Mavis more if i were you >:P
I won't reveal who all i'm adding until i get to them. i hate soiling things, but i will say i didn't plan on using Bisca. it would be a bit awkward since she's married with a kid lol
[Report This]Date: June 12 2015 1:57 AM Title: Family Reunion
Thank you, this story just helped me get over the bad day I've had. I just love reading your stuff, it always seems to brighten me up. I really enjoyed all the mixing and matching with the girls, it made for some great scenes. The Erza and Mira interaction was a nice touch, and the Wendy and Michelle pairing was awesome. The way they match each other, thanks to how you have set the terms of their sexual performance, made for great scene. I can't wait to read more, and see who you bring in next.
Author's Response:
I'm glad to hear you say that Shall, thats what i aspire for with my work. I love to know my stories brighten other's days when their down :)
I wanted to go all out on the bed scene mostly because i need to take a short break from this story for a few weeks, (yes i mean weeks this time) i plan on updating soon. I just have 2 commissions i need to do first, those take presidense. I'll update as soon as i can with chapter 16.
Glad to have you as a fan after all this time :)