[Report This]Date: February 12 2015 11:30 PM Title: Lost Magic part 4
That was an awesome ending to this arc. The castle fight was epic, and written perfectly. I could easily see that playing out on the show. The Celestial World chase for the keys was also done great, a very funny series of events. You really nailed all of the different spirits personalities and reactions. And of course, the sex scene was just as good as I'm used to seeing from you. Plus, Michelle showing up is a perfect cliffhanger to end on. There was just so much quality story, I see why the chapter is so long. You've done an amazing job so far, and I'll be looking forward to the continuation when you are ready to come back to it. Until then, I'll enjoy your upcoming stories.
P.S. I'm not so sure about this times challenge. The castle sounds vaguely like Cagliostro Castle, but I can't place the creature.
Author's Response:
Thank you Shall, its a pleasure to read your review and i thank you for taking the time to do so ^,^
As for the Challange it is not Cagliostro Castle sadly. The other thing i mentioned it being called was a School by the Dark Mage, i hope that helps :P Same goes from the creature, it comes from the universe i took the castle from.