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Reviewer: MostKnownUnknowns Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 03 2014 2:55 AM Title: Private Bruce Collins

Loved the theme. Please write more using this ad a template.

Or continue this. There is a lot more there.

Reviewer: richardosteel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 02 2014 8:39 AM Title: Private Bruce Collins

A story I've been looking for a long time. It was great and can't wait to see more. Loved it

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 01 2014 3:13 PM Title: Private Bruce Collins

Wow, I loved it.

Tall commanding woman, short submissive man. Their roles are perfect for each other.

I hope we see these two again in another part of the series.

The foot detail was great! Wished there were other parts as well, but this is in fact part of a series so I can't wait for the rest!

The title definitely got my attention to start reading this.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: December 01 2014 3:39 AM Title: Private Bruce Collins

  Sexy stuff with the poor private being left in a rather sticky situation(pun intended!) at the end of it. A little piece of advice, you don't really need to make a separate story for other chapters since your little cliffhanger at the end could progress to the next one shot easily. 

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 30 2014 6:46 PM Title: Private Bruce Collins

I liked the story, it was short and sexy and most importantly didn't have that cliche'd "I'm gonna kill you to get rid of the evidence" ending that most stories on this site have.

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