Date: November 22 2014 9:02 AM Title: Part 1
I don't feel much for Wilson, he has brought it upon himself although I did not expect Vanessa to be so cruel with Alexander but with a three chapter story like this one it should be one fast paced story, not my cup of tea but I did enjoy parts of it.
Date: November 17 2014 10:54 PM Title: Part 1
Nice first chapter, and the cliffhanger at the end. I'm really interested in this story. Haven't been following incorporated. But will follow this one.
I really feel bad for Alexander, he's the victim in this.
Thanks for the chapter. :)