[Report This]Date: November 08 2014 9:48 PM Title: Shrinking Mark
Fantastic story!
The pictures reallly helped convey the situation.
I like how you talked about every body part, the lips, boobs, feet, and panties.
The setup was good too. A woman who desires attention while her man claims to be too busy for her. Then she punishes him by forcing him to give her attention. I love it.
Ending was perfect too.
Going to sleep with a tiny man in the vagina provides good analogies. Its like he died a normal man, and he is gonna be born tommorow a tiny person to start his new life. He gets to relive what it means to be born again everyday.
The pictures were once again good, but also realistic. She does look like a sexy giantess in thos pics.
I really hope you write more becuase this was a great start.
[Report This]Date: November 08 2014 6:56 PM Title: Shrinking Mark
Sorry I accidentally gave you 4 stars, I correct it by 5 stars.
[Report This]Date: November 08 2014 6:55 PM Title: Shrinking Mark
Great story, really good! One question: who is that woman?
Author's Response:
Her name is Haley Coppin. I believe she was a British Page 3 girl. SHe does have a web site where she will make a fetish video for you although I haven't tried it myself. http://www.customs4u.com/customs/hayley/ Let me know if you get one! -North
Date: November 08 2014 6:28 PM Title: Shrinking Mark
I like the way it is going, and would love to see more sexy shots of this girl.
Author's Response:
This was planned to be a one chapter complete story but if I come uopn some more pics I may be inspired to do a second story as a follow up to this one. Thanks for the review.