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Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: August 27 2015 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 2

Just rereading this wonderful chapter. For some reason, I love how they pleasure themselves with the city at the end. Uprooting the citadel does emphasise how meaningless the city is compared to them.


Here:


drug her finger


You mean: Dragged


Here:


much time to thing


You mean: think



Author's Response:

Thank you for rereading! Haha, I'm glad you liked it a second time! I'll change those, usually I try to get these out as soon as they're done. A nasty habit I know, I need to proofread more.

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