Reviews For The Worms Turn
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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 29 2014 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 14

Fantastic story, although the ending left me with a bunch of questions.

The best part was the methods of how Olivia used Tyler. Insertion with taping him up was the best. Another nice part was tying him up with the floss, but taping a man and inserting him is just completely dominating!

Yuvonne makes this story much more meaningful. It provides that little light that Tyler needed.

I hope you write more stories about dominating woman with similar punishments. If I may make a suggestion, how about a teacher and a student? A hot teacher punishing a student every day. Or you could have a random teen get punished by a MILF that lives next door. I love your ideas and I hope you write more.

Reviewer: chrlorez Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 28 2014 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 14

Weird story with a weird-ass ending. I don't know what to make of it. It's not bad. Just weird.

Reviewer: realRS Signed [Report This]
Date: September 28 2014 8:52 AM Title: Chapter 14

Hell of a good story. An original idea, and written at a professional level.

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