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Reviewer: JDO Signed [Report This]
Date: October 01 2015 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 1

Someone was watching Suits when they got this idea? ;)

 

Absolutely fantastic story. Loving every minute of it. Writing is excellent.

Reviewer: TinyBrad Signed [Report This]
Date: October 03 2014 10:33 AM Title: Chapter 1

I thoroughly enjoyed this story, please write more like it, Infact I like all of your stories. Keep up the great writing!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 29 2014 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 14

Fantastic story, although the ending left me with a bunch of questions.

The best part was the methods of how Olivia used Tyler. Insertion with taping him up was the best. Another nice part was tying him up with the floss, but taping a man and inserting him is just completely dominating!

Yuvonne makes this story much more meaningful. It provides that little light that Tyler needed.

I hope you write more stories about dominating woman with similar punishments. If I may make a suggestion, how about a teacher and a student? A hot teacher punishing a student every day. Or you could have a random teen get punished by a MILF that lives next door. I love your ideas and I hope you write more.

Reviewer: Zingem Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 29 2014 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 1

This was by far one of the most excellent reads I've come across in a long time. I mean other than writing my story, I usually come on here looking for a quick release but this was so good that I came out of the bathroom and finished it. Excellent excellent all around. I hope to God you write a sequel because this deserves one. Thank you for sharing this :) and if you wouldn't mind, could you maybe check out my story as well and critique? I can tell that you're a great writer and I'm always looking for ways to improve my own writing as well. Either way, this was excellent. 5 stars!

Reviewer: chrlorez Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 28 2014 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 14

Weird story with a weird-ass ending. I don't know what to make of it. It's not bad. Just weird.

Reviewer: realRS Signed [Report This]
Date: September 28 2014 8:52 AM Title: Chapter 14

Hell of a good story. An original idea, and written at a professional level.

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