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Reviewer: Tigernach Signed [Report This]
Date: May 01 2015 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 9

I really enjoy your story, but I must say that your spelling and grammar have deteriorated since "Season1". As a technical writer by profession, I find these to be of significance. Not enough, mind you, to prevent me from reading your excellent tale! But if you could try to be consistant in improving both your spelling and grammar, I would bless you (if I had the ability to do so)LOL.

Otherwise, keep up the good story telling...

Reviewer: frankstergirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 29 2015 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 9

Really good chapter as always. Look forward to seeing the next :)

Reviewer: tinyguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 29 2015 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 9

Great update!!

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