Reviews For Homunculus
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Reviewer: zenyburger Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 06 2008 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 1

This story is god damn awsome! Its cruel just the way i like it!

Author's Response: Me too! I think I'm seriously damaged ;-)

Reviewer: Jester Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 14 2008 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 1

Awesome story, concept, and writing.  My only regret is that is one giant chapter, instead of several smaller, easier to read chapters.

Author's Response: Sorry about the long-ass chapter. I just signed on here last year, and I learned that somebody else had created a Cayce account and posted this story. Asuka was kind enough to reset the account and let me take over. One day, when I've got some free time, I'll see if I can break the story up into chapters without losing the comments.rnrnThanks for reading, Jester. Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Whittleman Signed [Report This]
Date: October 06 2007 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 1

This is a great story. I especially liked the crushed Oreo part. That was genius, and sexy genius at that. GTS writing as an art seems to be on the decline, so it's refreshing to see stories like this. Well done.

Author's Response: Thanks, Whittleman. I'm going to add "sexy genius" to my resume ;-)

Reviewer: JohanSutherland Signed [Report This]
Date: September 26 2007 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 1

Dude that was good. I loved our little hero because he's smart. I mean, why does it take so long to others to ealise how useless it to fight when you're sooooo tiny. Here we can see a tiny dude using his brain, and doing great. I realy liked qhen he drove "momma" crazy. "Do you think your husband will come back tonight?"

Very great story 



Author's Response: I really enjoyed the way the balance of power kept shifting between Ray and his stepmom, and it made the story a lot more fun to write. I've always hated passive protagonists in GTS stories, and I thought it would be cool to have a hero who uses his wits to occasionally get the upper hand. Of course, when it backfired, there'd be hell to pay...rnrnThanks for reading, Johan. Glad you enjoyed the story!

Reviewer: TinyMan23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 20 2007 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 1

Awesome story man.. i love it, i lovve it, and i love it.. my favourite of em all =]

“But Momma, he said the ‘F’ word and he called me the ‘B’ word!”

“And I’m gonna whip your ‘A’ word if you don’t sit down right now.” 

That part was soooo funny! I was choking from laughter. Man great story. Easily my favourite 



Author's Response: Glad you liked it, TM. Thanks!

Reviewer: dajo Signed [Report This]
Date: January 01 2007 9:25 AM Title: Chapter 1

I cant remember reading a better story. Though I would have loved a little bit more of sexual play between the boy and his stepmom.



Author's Response: Poor Ray. You guys just don't want him to catch a break, do you? ;-)rnrnThanks for reading, Dajo!

Reviewer: Zalrus IX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 29 2006 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 1

Love story. I like the balence of good and evil, so I am very happy when he gets to see susan and the feet.... well, who could not love the feet? (Don't answer that.) but yes very long too, I liked that, very good. good.....good. just good. 10 for you. Now Write more stories. and respond to reviews. and eat your peas. that is all.

Author's Response: Yes, I realize I have an unhealthy fascination with feet. Fortunately, I have a lovely girlfriend who not only thinks it's adorable, but enjoys mashing that particular button. Life is pretty goddamn sweet ;-)rnrnI'm writing another story, and I *finally* responded to the reviews. I make no promises about the peas...rnrnThanks, Zalrus!

Reviewer: billyevil Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 20 2006 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 1

I enjoyed this story. You really made it fun and gave it a nice love story ending, which I think is cool. There isn't enough happy endings in this genre and maybe we should try that now and again. I really enjoyed the parts where he was punished with the feet. One thing I didn't get was why he was so whiny about how his food was presented. Seemed like he was a bit spoiled that way to me, but then again I've never been his size. Thank you for the story.

Author's Response: If you're going to just beat the hell out of your protagonist for 200+ pages, the least you can do is give the poor bastard a happy ending ;-) Glad you liked it, Billy!

Reviewer: ImDownHere Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 17 2006 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great story.  Very well written. I can't remember when I've read a better story.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading the darn thing, IDH! And thanks for taking the time to rate and comment. Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: picjusbro Signed [Report This]
Date: December 13 2006 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 1

Story was really good probably one of the best I have read in years I just wish there more interaction bewteen the shrinky and nicole and her feet.

Author's Response: To tell you the truth, I originally hadn't planned on that much interaction between Nicole and Ray (other than some mild tormenting and holding/petting). But just about the time I was publishing this story on Giantess Magic, a debate started raging about whether or not including a minor character in a story made it child pornography. The arguments got a bit silly, especially when people started invoking Hitler and 9/11 in their arguments. And just to spite them, I started adding scenes I hadn't originally intended to include. Looking back, some of them seem awkward and a bit ill-advised. But I think some of them work quite well. I'll leave it to you to decide which ;-) Anyway, thanks for reading Picjusbro. Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: RamsusXIII Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 10 2006 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 1

Say that was a pretty good story.  It seemed to drag in many parts. Which made it difficult to read, but all in all it was a good tale.

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it, Ramsus. Thanks!

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