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Reviewer: dood07 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 27 2015 3:44 AM Title: Two Timer

Here is a really nice chapter, clearly building the suspens or should I say the wait for the next part ! It was really fun to read, I liked so much how Wendy did her best to help both her big brother and her huge new friend, it was cute somehow :3

I think I get more and more fond of this Amazon as time passes by, and even though I know she's not the hero, this is this girl that I love the most :3

This is really nice stuff you share here, thank you very very much Nostory, you're a wonderful author !

I don't think I need to say it, but I'll tell it anyway : I'm waiting for the next part !! :D

Author's Response:

Thanks dood, comments very much appreciated! 

Next chapter will be the penultimate chapter and then it'll be over. Hopefully before my semester starts, I feel so lazy right now :(

Its awesome to hear that someone likes Wendy right now, I always believed she was not a very popular character in the story. I understand why of course.

 

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 19 2015 3:50 PM Title: Two Timer

Great! I was starting to wonder when we'd get another chapter of this! Cassie was soo cute in this chapter! And when you put the title as "two timing" I kinda though you meant Cassie or Alvin would be hitting up someone else or something like that, glad that's not the case. Anyway, I'm really excited to see this story all the way through!



Author's Response:

Cassie is cute, even cuter here :) 

I apologise for the long wait, it was hard firing up the engine after so long. 

 

Heehee, the title was meant to be misleading, Wendy was the only one 'two timing' if you know what I mean. There's 2 more chapters and then that'll be the end of this story. 

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 19 2015 3:26 PM Title: Two Timer

A three-way battle of wits. I loved it! Although, part of me wishes Alvin had countered the Batman crack with "WHY... SO....SERIOUS?"


;-)

Author's Response:

Aw...I wish I had thought of that line when I was writing it. 

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed [Report This]
Date: December 19 2015 10:25 AM Title: Two Timer

Not much happening in this chapter. But the story it self was enjoyable. The slice of life with size difference in it, is always interesting.

 

 



Author's Response:

Yeah I thought you might like seeing how businesses in this world function, how it has changed from ours. Thanks for the review!

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