Date: November 16 2015 9:17 PM Title: Birthday Plans
Yeeeeeeeeesss so glad you got the time to write again I love this story :)
Author's Response:
Thank you but you'll have to wait about 3-4 weeks for my next update. Hope its not too long!
Date: November 10 2015 1:53 AM Title: Birthday Plans
To calrify this is what I read:
Very sure. When his dad, my stepdad , was still around he had it every year for his birthday.
The way the sentence is worded make it seem like, at least to me, that Cassie's step-dad is his dad. Also extra space by that comma which isn't needed.
I want Wayne to have a bio, but I'm not sure if I have the hair for an image. I have bios for Sidney, Althea and the Angels. Other characters I didn't consider important enough.
Author's Response:
Okay, I see what you mean, I've altered it to make it less confusing. If one person is confused then its a sign I've made the wordings clear enough so its been altered to this:
“Very sure. When his dad, my stepdad , was still around he had it every year for his birthday. The look on his face, you’d think the prettiest girl in school had kissed him,” Wendy answered.
As for Gems of the Sky stuff, I think that should be enough since these bios should be reserved for important characters. Anything that is remotely spoilerly, just email me :) Its been a while since we talked.
Date: November 09 2015 4:52 PM Title: Birthday Plans
Not much I have to say. Well, nothing meaningful anyway. Except Cassie's step-dad is Alivn's dad? Did I read that correctly?
I've done my own profiles now, though I could add one more character, finally but I have two conundrums which are causing me to be reluctant to share them: 1. Not surehow accurately they reprisent the descriptions I gave if them. And 2. How I'd lay them out on Giantess World. I could just link to a download I suppose.
Author's Response:
I may have put that in wrongly, Cassie has no stepfather, only Alvin has step-parents here. I'll go re-read it.
Well for those profiles you should give something basic, not too detailed but with enough to give the readers a rough guide of how the characters should be. You could make it a chapter on its own , easier for people to read them. Email me if you want to discuss this further.
[Report This]Date: November 08 2015 11:31 PM Title: Birthday Plans
Interesting points about Cassie. I don't think that Alvin would have report Cassie for the abuse. If she sent that picture and let him go right after that, he very likaly would have commit suicide.
But all seems well now.
Author's Response:
Yeah he'd keep it to himself but I don't think he'd kill himself over that. Thanks for the review, and to all who have commented, good to know people still care about it!
Date: November 08 2015 7:11 PM Title: Birthday Plans
Ooooh, good chapter. I agree with gadgetmawombo about the anger issues thing and Cassie. Hopefully she never takes it out on Alvin (again).
Great update, and I would like to see some intimacy at the dance, if you know what I mean. ^.^
Author's Response:
I know what you mean, you'll see whether it happens or not. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: November 08 2015 3:39 PM Title: Birthday Plans
Great chapter! I'm glad you updated this, I was starting to worry about this story a little bit. I'm glad Cassie hasn't gotten in trouble for what she did, honestly this girl has anger issues or something and doesn't really think about consequences until it's too late. We all remember that she forcefully abducted Alvin and mentally/physically tortured him at her house for several hours effectively breaking him! I'm sure if Alvin would have reported that, she would be in deep shit too.
Anyway I'm looking forward to the their prom, I wonder how they are supposed to dance together? Is Alvin gonna be pressed onto her breast while she dances or something? Is she gonna hold Alvin's limbs with her fingertips while he dances in midair and she dances? I'm eager for the next one!
Author's Response:
I've got it all planned out and you'll see this story finished before 2016 comes around. That's when things get fun :)
I think Cassie won't be venting on Alvin again, it was a mistake she won't be repeating. You're right in that Alvin would have landed her in a lot of trouble had he bothered to report her.
You'll see how they even dance, Alvin might get second base or he might not...
[Report This]Date: November 08 2015 2:36 PM Title: Birthday Plans
An excellent way to make up for lost time! I can't help wondering, though, if Alvin and Cassie will prove as good at dancing as the prom-goers in SHE'S ALL THAT.
Author's Response:
Thanks, it was tough finding time to write. Sadly you'll have to wait until December to find out if they are the good at dancing or how Titans do prom dances with smaller sizes.