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Reviewer: tinyguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 14 2015 8:05 AM Title: Hidden Demons

Awesome chapter as always! Can't wait to see where this goes!

Author's Response:

Hey thanks, I just hope you'll enjoy the last arc, its being rewritten as we speak. 

Reviewer: White Wolf Signed [Report This]
Date: June 13 2015 10:59 AM Title: Hidden Demons

Some good backstory on Cassie here.  Based on this chapter and what some other reviewers have said, I guess I read it a little backward - I kinda sensed that Alvin was the one that didn't return *Cassie's* feelings.  The read I got was that he finds her attractive, but not "relationship material".  Yet she seems to constantly want to be with him.  And if she has no feelings for him, is all her kindness to Alvin based on guilt?  It seems she probably wouldn't have given him the time of day until she wronged him.  Just thinking "out loud"...



Author's Response:

Glad a different approach to Cassie's past than Wendy worked out well.  All your questions will be answered in due time, when the time is right.

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 13 2015 9:01 AM Title: Hidden Demons

So Cassie had her fair share of BS too then. And it's looking like Alvin at least is giving Wendy a second chance...Anyway great chapter I'm glad you're coming back with this! And it looks like some form of Romance may start between Alvin and Cassie? Maybe. I have some doubts though, I kinda feel like Cassie doesn't see Alvin that way, but who knows.



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Wendy could be completely wrong of course, misreading everything about the two. We'll see...

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 13 2015 7:11 AM Title: Hidden Demons

Heh! Wendy should write a self-help book.

"HOW TO GO FROM BALL-BREAKER TO MATCH-MAKER IN ONE EASY STEP."

Author's Response:

Only if she succeeds :)

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