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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: March 12 2015 12:25 PM Title: Track Practice

More like an older vintage made on a relatively smaller budget. And one can either like it...or not.

[Insert "shrug" icon, here.]

Author's Response:

  I did my research on it, seems like Fifty Shades it wasn't well received in its time either in domestic markets. Not my kind of movie , as surprising it may sound since I am a regular on this fetish site. 

Reviewer: tinyguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 11 2015 12:51 PM Title: Track Practice

Really enjoyed this chapter! Glad you found the time to update the story.

Curious as to what the other multinsized story you're thinking of.

Author's Response:

 Thanks, I look for the little pockets and make us of it. 

It's still set in the Intersizables universe and like Downtrodden, it started life as a completely different idea, totally unrelated to the series vgiv had in mind but I wanted to adapt it straight it away for the series. Just couldn't figure out how to let it until recently. 

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 11 2015 7:53 AM Title: Track Practice

Well, specifying what I loved about this chapter feels--to me--like the vivisection of a good joke. Kills the enjoyment. But, I'll do my best to oblige!

It's refreshing that Alvin and Cassie are starting out as just friends. Most of the time, in other's stories, it's more like lust at first sight on either the giantess' part, or the little guy's, or both. In other words; a glorified sadomasochistic bond (minus the 9.5 WEEKS worth of "novelty" items).

Author's Response:

I do read smutty stories where the giant gal and mini man try to bone each other within minutes of being introduced but as a writer, I'll try to steer myself from such stories. It just isn't my cup of tea. 

That is also a very specific time period you just mentioned, is there personal experience behind it :/ ?

Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 10 2015 11:09 PM Title: Track Practice

Well I still love this story. I like all of the people in the story. I just want them to date already. It would make so much more since.

Author's Response:

Even Wendy? You like the bully? Well to each his own( or her, you could be a woman for all I know.) 

I can't comment on the status of Cassvin( or is it Alssie?) right now. Even I don't know where it'll go and I'm the writer XD!

 

 

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 10 2015 10:38 PM Title: Track Practice

Great Chapter! Probably my favorite chapter of this story so far! Not only did we get lots of character development and story progression but we also got a small glipse of the past and a small "date" between friends!

The gossip in this chapter was also really funny! I can't wait for the next chapter of this, I can foresee some trouble heading Alvin's way after the treatment Wendy got at Cassie's hands...

Also I saw a small error:

“ I’ve heard of that guy. Want me to take care of him?” Wendy joked, cracking her knuckles.

Don't you mean Cassie^ joked? Wendy wasn't around was she?

 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks again. Not sure when the next update happens but it'll be after I update BFG again. 

Gossip usually is, especially when the imagination runs wild and creates the most ridiculous explanations. I'm so glad I put this chapter in,it was meant to be filler but like every chapter, it has a clear purpose. 

 

Thanks for pointing out the error, I changed it the moment I read the review. No, Wendy wasn't around, she wouldn't dare show her face around Cassie. 

 

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