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Reviewer: Darien Fawkes Signed [Report This]
Date: February 26 2015 2:07 PM Title: Hunting the Hunter

I guess then that makes you a well known author on this site then. Sweet, I know a celebrity author that I can borrow money from.

And no that was a pretty good method of getting back at Wendy. It may not have been very painful but I've yet to read about someone doing something similar. Therefore creativity points have been earned.



Author's Response:

I guess so, judging by the response to Downtrodden. 

I thought the method would tie into Cassie's love of astronomy, plus you're right, I've never seen anyone try . Any foot related stuff usually involves the person being shoved into their shoe, being taken for a run or pressed uncomfortably. Painful? Yes but it lacks a personal touch, this one achieves both. 

 

One day though, I'll have to write a very painful torture scene, just to see how far I can go. It'll have to fit the story its in but I'll do my best to inflict pain on the character, regardless of giantess or tiny. 

Reviewer: Darien Fawkes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 25 2015 5:55 PM Title: Hunting the Hunter

hey, i've been having the same problem with school. At least you've kept up the great quality. That was a satisfying revenge, and you found a way to work in some character development for Cassie. Nicely pulled off my friend.



Author's Response:

Thank you. I had this doubt it wouldn't be satisfying because Cassie wasn't harsh enough. Yeah, school is taking up all my time from story writing and I've plenty of my plate when it comes to this and school. I think its the same for quite of the more well known writers on the site, school keeping them from updating their stories. 

Reviewer: Mr France Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 18 2015 3:55 PM Title: Hunting the Hunter

Astonishing story you have here. I profoundly love your noatural writing style. 



Author's Response:

 Thanks, I'm glad you like it. 

Reviewer: Prodi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 14 2015 1:41 AM Title: Hunting the Hunter

Hey there.

Just thought I'd drop by to give you a little encouragement. Your stories are really well written and personally, I don't mind stories that are more plot and less fetish stuff.

Take all the time you need and keep up the good work!



Author's Response:

Thanks for understanding, real life can really keep you away from this. Not to mention my other gts stories on this site, got a BFG one that I need to write. 

I'll get back to this in March( probably, given I usually write 2 chapters elsewhere and school kills me.)

 

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 11 2015 1:28 PM Title: Hunting the Hunter

Wendy strkes me as being a chronic counter-puncher. No matter what you recommend, suggest, or otherwise try to tell such people what to do, they will spitefully always do the opposite.

Author's Response:

Especially after humiliations like this I'll add!She isn't the sort of person to take this lying down. 

Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 11 2015 9:18 AM Title: Hunting the Hunter

Well awesome story. Oh don't worry I still give a damn about this story. It's probably one of my favorites. It's crazy I didn't think it's been a month.

Anyways I think it's going to be awhile before Wendy stops messing with Alvin. But I can't wait for the next chapter, since it will have Alvin and Cassie.

Thanks for the chapter

Author's Response:

Yeah, time flies eh? 

I hope you'll enjoy it, these two chapters were inspired by a suggestion from vgiv, glad to see you like this one. 

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 11 2015 1:38 AM Title: Hunting the Hunter

I shoudn't be one to talk considering how long it's been since my last update but it HAS been a while...I had to go back and read some chapters to refresh my memory.

Now I will say: this chapter was well written. Having said that I kinda feel like we could have gotten all this info from a simple phrase. Something like: "After punishing Wendy for almost burning Alvin, Cassie headed towards the track to watch him practice."

And then we could have gotten abit more progression. Like I said, it was a well written chapter, but it felt abit unecessary.



Author's Response:

If I did as you suggested, it would affect certain chapters, the impact wouldn't be as great. You'll see what I mean when the time is right. vgiv and I talked about this and we felt this chapter needed to exist. It doesn't progress the story but it does lay the groundwork for future chapters. It might come across as strange to have such a chapter here in the middle of a story but it is what it is. 

 

Thanks for the review and I hope you find the time to update your own story, you cut it off at a really interesting point!

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